Hail and Farewell to Paris - Comments

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    Lmfao I can't wait to see what she comes up with.
    AHH.
    I hope Mike FINALLY backs off now. Maybe he finally realizes that Ava and Billie Joe love each other. I mean, srsly, look what they've been through. :cheese:

    Wow I love it!

    OH. Btw. My mom's friend just gave birth to a little boy and girl. The girl's name is Ava. XD
    November 5th, 2007 at 05:56am
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    you know how to pull at the strings of my heart!
    it was all so beautiful
    and lovely
    and God Billie knows how to be a rightful man

    this was too perfect. they are finally to be wed.
    only worry: mike
    Yes... it only took him 3 or 4 times... I actually lost count. :lol:

    Well, Becks, you are the QUEEN of mushy adorable proposals. *hugs*

    And yeah, we still have that little Mike problem to deal with... :o Scary.

    *<3*
    November 4th, 2007 at 01:20am
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    hii i started reading today and i love it and the prequel too
    October 26th, 2007 at 09:42am
  • peacemaker.

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    so hopefully i have enough inspiration to give this story the ending that I feel it needs

    ..That truely scares me. ;-;

    But OMG yay! They're fianlly enganged! This chapter totally made my day better. I love how hopelessly romantic Billie Joe is.
    I LOVE it. :]
    xx
    October 25th, 2007 at 02:10am
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    you know how to pull at the strings of my heart!
    it was all so beautiful
    and lovely
    and God Billie knows how to be a rightful man

    this was too perfect. they are finally to be wed.
    only worry: mike
    October 24th, 2007 at 06:45am
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    That's not a jewel - that's a rock!!
    Keep this coming, I love it :D:D
    October 24th, 2007 at 01:08am
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    wow i think i have to say that this was my favorite chapter keep it up can't wait =)
    October 22nd, 2007 at 10:32am
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    Slap Happy Bullet:
    images that remind me of this story:

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    and simply because it's vintage:
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    I love all these things that remind you of Hail and Farewell...I've been watching a lot of Hedy Lamarr and Marlene Dietrich films so hopefully i have enough inspiration to give this story the ending that I feel it needs.
    October 21st, 2007 at 03:57am
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    Awwww!!

    That was adorable... I love Joey and Jake. <3 And it was adorable how JAKE came up with the idea of how to propose. Lol. Billie takes advice from his kids on marraige...

    And OMG Mike! I feel so bad for him, really... like, at this point, I can't possibly want Billie and Ava to split... at all. I mean, Joe and Jake love her. And the running off with the best friend thing is just horrible! =O But still, poor Mike... he needs to find somebody. :( Somebody that his best friend is not lin love with... *hugs him*

    Love it as always. Keep it coming! =D
    October 21st, 2007 at 12:08am
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    images that remind me of this story:

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    and simply because it's vintage:
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    October 19th, 2007 at 05:20am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    The whole bottle or just a nip??
    Keep this coming, I love it :D:D
    October 18th, 2007 at 01:10am
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    awwweee.
    that was so cute!
    i'm so scared about Mike. I think it was a really good idea to have something instantly remind him of Ava, and it was a great way, too.
    Joey and Ava worked it out, how great. I liked how you had him say “I’m my dad’s son”. It was quite perfect, him being stubborn like Billie.
    I also like how Jake is so witty. I laughed at the image of Billie Joe and Jake eating ice cream happily while Ava and Joey were yelling down each other's throats.
    So what's going to happen with Mike?

    This was an excellent update, and I was getting quite impatient with it. Well done, Becka. I love your classy writing.
    October 17th, 2007 at 09:10am
  • peacemaker.

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    Omfg Mike no. T_T
    He has Brittney and Billie has Ava.
    Does someone need to remind him who she loves? What they went through?
    I hope Billie Joe can propose and have everything to right before Mike has a chance to fuck it up. Maybe as a bonus Mike would find someone in Venice. *shrugs*
    I love:] xxx
    October 17th, 2007 at 08:15am
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    AHHH!!!!
    this makes me so happy.
    yay.... i knew it was just a stupid fight they were having. a very long dragged out fight. i love it sooo much. it makes me so happy.
    GAH I love you.

    how I always felt like you needed me, like I was you’re Sting and you were my Roxanne…”
    I chuckled and his chest vibrated in a giggle, “It sounds pussy but that’s how I saw it, you were a more classier Julia Roberts and I was a hotter Richard Gere”


    Pretty Woman has got to be one of my favorite films and it fit so well. I'm surprised you let Billie come up with it. The Sting and Roxanne was a much more romantic reference, of course. The song is so- perfect. I laughed quite a bit when he mentioned Richard Gere and it let me forgive Billie too, properly. I'm glad Ava learned how to be her own person, even though it must be very hard when you can give in to Billie Joe Armstrong's seduction at any moment. I'd just be one constant love machine.

    I don't know how you can make this story end, I honestly don't. It's all so magical and lovely. I will be rather sad when you post the last chapter, even if it is a happy ending.
    So will you end it with the wedding? I just don't want to think about it because it's all so beautiful- and it's exactly how I want my life to turn out to be.
    October 3rd, 2007 at 08:40am
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    Edward Cullen.:
    Honestly? I can't stand Gus. He annoys me. I can understand perfectly why Ava doesn't like him.
    I LOVED this part, though.
    Hopefully Billie will stop being such a jealous jerk.
    He BETTEr propose now that's shes ready. :tehe:
    I love it! Wow
    xxx
    [When you updated, I was actually reading Drunk in Paris :tehe:]
    I agree. Gus is a prick.
    *hugs Billie and Ava*
    Okay... so finally there's talking! Not yelling... not sex to make em feel better... lol. Awesome part, Becka. =)
    October 3rd, 2007 at 06:04am
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    Honestly? I can't stand Gus. He annoys me. I can understand perfectly why Ava doesn't like him.
    I LOVED this part, though.
    Hopefully Billie will stop being such a jealous jerk.
    He BETTEr propose now that's shes ready. :tehe:
    I love it! Wow
    xxx
    [When you updated, I was actually reading Drunk in Paris :tehe:]
    October 3rd, 2007 at 03:08am
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    ... ... ...
    Keep it coming :D:D
    October 2nd, 2007 at 02:53pm
  • GreenDay2173

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    bum ba ba bum....maybe =) great chapter
    October 2nd, 2007 at 10:38am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    i should be pissed off at mike, but all i can say is "awweee"
    i feel bad for the guy because he thinks that he's so in the wrong for falling for ava, but honestly, if i knew her, i'd be madly in love with her too.

    Tre on Pro Plus... that's hilarious! Nice touch.

    I loved the beginning. It just seemed so calm, but something sinister brewing beneath it. Sort of like in movies where it's a nice sunny day, and it shows an empty park with one swing on the swingset that is slightly going back and forth. There is no one in sight, so you feel an eerieness, not a scary sort of eerie, but the kind that makes you feel suddenly alone. I guess that's what it reminded me of.

    And damn Billie for being the way he is! "Forgive and forget" is he psycho? No matter what any girl says, girls will never forgive and forget.
    When Billie said "kiddo", I just lost it. That's why Ava can't ever truly be angry with him. He lets her be immature, something that she didn't know even existed within her.

    I love this story SO much, Becka. Will it ever end? I almost don't want it to.
    September 27th, 2007 at 10:18am
  • Graffiti

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    O_O Awwww, Mikey!!!
    *hugs him*
    He's so cute... okay, I don't know what I want anymore... I, as Ava, am still annoyed with Billie... but not so annoyed as I'd want his heart broken if Ava went with Mike... but then, I love Mike so much in this and REALLY wanna see him happy... which he won't be anyway because Billie will be upset... so, Mike's screwed?
    Aww. I'm sad now... poor Mike.

    <3
    September 26th, 2007 at 06:56am