Hail and Farewell to Paris - Comments

  • GreenDay2173

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    awwwww good chapter
    September 11th, 2007 at 08:24am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    OH MY GOSH!
    is he seriously popping the question? AHH!!! it's all just so odd because they honestly never had real problems.. other than her past. he just, loves her SO much. i know she'll say yes. i've learned to know her all to well over the months.

    i like how you kept in mind how horrible billie is with directions, of how they met. it was a cute reminder- when everything was still mysterious. Now it's all familiar and filled with love. Billie pushing Ava into the canal was uncalled for! That is just something you do NOT do to a girl, no matter how amusing it would be.

    I don't understand how Ava didn't haul off and slap him when he did that, but I guess if I were in his presence, I wouldn't dare lay a finger upon him. He certainly knows her weakness- which is basicly just him. They're so cute. I can't believe that all the drama is gone.

    I love this story and I don't know what I'll do when it ends. Do you have any other ideas in mind?

    And this reminded me of Ava and You and this story that's like magic.
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    i LOVE you
    September 11th, 2007 at 07:13am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    *jaw drops* he's gonna propose?!?!
    keep this coming!
    As an aside, for my French AS I have to read Baudelaire...
    September 11th, 2007 at 03:13am
  • peacemaker.

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    OMFG YAY.
    They're getting married!
    Or well, he's going to propose!
    kljfgf Thiss made my day, this whole part.

    I chuckled shaking my head, “they probably are just big Green Day fans.”
    “…fuckin rats with wings that’s what they are” he growled downing his coffee.


    XD BJ sounds just like my boyfriend. I love it. I'm so happy Ava and Billie's relationship is pretty much perfect. <3
    September 11th, 2007 at 03:06am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    whatever happened to leaving a message???
    Keep this coming, it's awesome.
    September 7th, 2007 at 03:20am
  • Graffiti

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    Yay! *does happy dance*

    Okay, so Ava let it out and is now happy with Venice... yay. And Billie bonds with the locals over Playboy, which is just funny... :]

    I think things are finally now as they should be with Mike n Brit. :) Brit is nice and bows down to the amazing Mike, and Mike gets over the thought of marrying her to appreciate the momentary niceness. It's better that way... lol.

    So, basically, the big problem we're left with now is that stupid show.

    Which Billie had better not go on. :P

    *<3*
    September 6th, 2007 at 08:59am
  • Phantasmagoria

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    Amazing Update.
    September 6th, 2007 at 05:04am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    OHH- i LOVE drama. it's so deliciously yummy.
    So uhmm- will Mike's little mess up hurt Ava and Billie when he finds out?
    I love Tre for thinking that Ava is hot, and being so open about it. I know that Mike thinks this, but he actually has some manners.

    It's all so crazy! I feel bad for Ava because she thinks that Billie doesn't love her and all that, but if all these feelings are so strong and they're so sure about no one else can compare to them,
    then WHY don't they get married? I'm just waiting for this to happen, and the only, I mean only way for them to ever NOT get married would be if Billie met someone else that he thought was amazing and he was more compatible with. I know Ava would never want to leave him, ever.

    So... ahh... all this is KILLING ME!
    I say just post all of the chapters so I can read it.
    yes- do that.
    September 6th, 2007 at 04:59am
  • peacemaker.

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    I'll shoot her, too. :]
    It's good that they're going away, they desperately need it -- especially if it'll save their relationship.
    August 27th, 2007 at 11:15pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    Can I shoot Sarah?? Please?
    This is amazing, keep it coming please :D:D
    August 24th, 2007 at 09:50pm
  • Graffiti

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    Okay, I haven't commented in a while, but I shall blame parental issues... and say I've missed this story like I miss coffee ice cream.
    Which is a lot, by the way.

    First off, I think I'll just tell you I LOVE you. And your story, that's quite badass as well. And you already know you're an awesome writer...

    Okay, now, first I'll just say this: Poor Mike! He needs that psycho bitch radar... I mean, Brittany, Heidi... uck. *hugs him* What, no love for the bassist??? I vote Mike gets to be happy now! I mean, damn...

    And secondly... Damn again. Sarah is not only a psycho bitch, she is the Queen of Psychobitchland. And she shall go to Rock Hell. *imparts magical Bobbye wrath on her* Some people, you're just supposed to leave alone and let them be happy... Billie and Ava are a good example. They're adorable and sweet, and they need a damn hug too... *hugs them as well*
    I'll resist saying obscene things about Sarah, but Ava has that covered... "Fuck off, you tart."
    *giggles*
    I think I shall start calling people 'tarts' now. xD
    Damn pastries!

    <3
    Love you, Becka!
    August 24th, 2007 at 09:27am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    haha... yes i would definitely join you, becka. i would adore a house filled with vintage dresses....

    and i cannot believe all these horrible things. will billie and ava work out? i don't know.. i'll be satisfied either way, no matter how sad that is. i'm addicted to romantic thoughts and stories and i do believe you're the reason why, darling.

    ahh... just when i could NOT hate sarah anymore, it happened. i mean, seriously. i hate the girl. they're all crazy! and poor mike, he has to feel bad about it because it was HIS fiance that introduce her to billie joe.
    it's just a horrible situation.

    but i'm willing to bet that venice fixes it all, and if it doesn't, then nothing shall.
    August 23rd, 2007 at 05:52am
  • Ridele

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    Slap Happy Bullet:
    that's funny that heidi mentioned the wedding singer because that's exactly what i thought when i first read that chapter.
    and i had honestly- for some menacing reason- hoped that heidi would be a wonderful person that Mike would fall in love with. If he doesn't know if his fiance even loves him, then why does he wait around? i don't like seeing him sad whatsoever.
    so i hope that's the last of heidi because her effects will definitely last long after her presence. she's so.. soo.... AHH! the type of fan i love to hate.

    it's so sad that ava is leaving paris.. for good. and what a horrible final goodbye. i love her to death. i have a feeling that lack of paris may cause fights.
    and i can't help but wonder-- will her and billie be forever? i know that she picked him up when the wreckage was neck deep... but her and billie may not last. of course there is more evidence going against such a thought. i just wanted to think about it for a moment.

    i do love this story and i love you for writing such a thing, becka. i must admit, with all of my heart, that ava inspires me to hunt through thriftstores and to wear dresses even when it's not nessecary. -- with that in mind, i have been buying wonderful dresses and wearing them simply because i'm a girl and i should do those things.

    i do believe i have gone on too much about such things.
    Kristina darling I adore you. I really do. I would love to buy a house and fill it with vintage dresses and shoes so I could prance around and pretend to be beautiful calssic actresses. I know you'd join me.
    August 22nd, 2007 at 01:16am
  • peacemaker.

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    I'm with Slapp Happy Bullet. I was hoping Heidi was a great person that Mike would fall in love with.
    Especially now. Brittany and Sarah are both part of this whole thing. Poor Ava and Billie.
    I hope he does give Sarah exactly what she deserves.
    August 22nd, 2007 at 12:44am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    that's funny that heidi mentioned the wedding singer because that's exactly what i thought when i first read that chapter.
    and i had honestly- for some menacing reason- hoped that heidi would be a wonderful person that Mike would fall in love with. If he doesn't know if his fiance even loves him, then why does he wait around? i don't like seeing him sad whatsoever.
    so i hope that's the last of heidi because her effects will definitely last long after her presence. she's so.. soo.... AHH! the type of fan i love to hate.

    it's so sad that ava is leaving paris.. for good. and what a horrible final goodbye. i love her to death. i have a feeling that lack of paris may cause fights.
    and i can't help but wonder-- will her and billie be forever? i know that she picked him up when the wreckage was neck deep... but her and billie may not last. of course there is more evidence going against such a thought. i just wanted to think about it for a moment.

    i do love this story and i love you for writing such a thing, becka. i must admit, with all of my heart, that ava inspires me to hunt through thriftstores and to wear dresses even when it's not nessecary. -- with that in mind, i have been buying wonderful dresses and wearing them simply because i'm a girl and i should do those things.

    i do believe i have gone on too much about such things.
    August 21st, 2007 at 07:17am
  • peacemaker.

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    Aww, I adore Mike in this chapter.
    I cant wait til shes actually all moved in with Bj.
    August 21st, 2007 at 05:36am
  • peacemaker.

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    Poor Ava =[.
    For some reason, I get the feeling that Heidie is making some of this stuff up. *shrugs*
    Poor Mike, also. He can't find anyone good for him.
    Hopefully this doesnt murder their weekend.
    I love it <3
    August 20th, 2007 at 02:45am
  • Phantasmagoria

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    Awsome chapter. More soon?
    August 20th, 2007 at 12:02am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    i really want some crazy stuff to happen.
    i mean- i always prefer it when it's with ava and billie joe because he's so damn cute when he's sucking up. (the sick bag was a nice touch, by the way. i laughed quite a bit)
    i knew that eventually mike would stray from her. he has to- but i was afraid at first that he would try to get ava... you know the way dead boy was. i actually may enjoy that. i love it when there's horrible drama.
    August 18th, 2007 at 06:53am
  • lfjoefpj

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    i reckon he should go off with an irish girl coz brittany is a nobber.
    more please?
    x
    August 17th, 2007 at 06:02pm