Hail and Farewell to Paris - Comments

  • sentimental Freak.

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    aww how cute!
    joey has a little crush on Ava and billie got himself a competition lol [:
    June 24th, 2007 at 10:22pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    Uhm, NOW?!
    Keep this coming, it's awesome :D:D
    June 24th, 2007 at 09:02pm
  • Bitches.

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    heh, billie and ava having a little fun :tehe:
    June 24th, 2007 at 09:02pm
  • sentimental Freak.

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    AHH this sequel is sooo good!
    i feel bad for mike but agree that he deserves better
    &billie and ava are so cute together!
    June 22nd, 2007 at 10:32pm
  • peacemaker.

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    :cheese: They're so cute.

    LOL at Billie Joe's California inside you bit. :tehe:

    I love it. <33
    June 22nd, 2007 at 05:47pm
  • Bitches.

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    It's so cute! :D
    Awww poor Mike though :[
    June 22nd, 2007 at 03:55pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    Haha he is so cheeky and cheesey.
    I love this, keep it coming :D:D
    June 22nd, 2007 at 02:49pm
  • AndTheCowSaidMoo

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    Good job on introducing Davey btw. I forgot to say before.
    This chapter was awesome as usual. Im glad they're finally getting their arses into gear, but now Im waiting for the other shoe to drop...like I know that something bad may be just around the corner. Only time will tell.
    xoxo Nat.
    June 22nd, 2007 at 12:42pm
  • Bitches.

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    it's absolutely brilliant :tehe:
    i'm so glad you wrore a sequel :]
    June 21st, 2007 at 07:47pm
  • nyyanks0222

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    ahh i cant get enough of this story...great job!
    June 20th, 2007 at 09:02pm
  • Graffiti

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    *subscribes*

    Davey... was awesome... *hugs him* More Davey!!! =D

    And oh my god, did Mike and Brit split?? Like, voila, it's over? Please?
    *mutters* Psycho bitch....
    *cough*
    Yeah, he deserves better... I mean, she locks him away from Billie!! Who in their right mind does that?

    I obviously loved it... as usual...

    ;)
    June 20th, 2007 at 07:18pm
  • peacemaker.

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    AH.
    I don't think its possible to tell you how much I love you for writing a sequal. :tehe:
    I cannot wait to see what this story holds. <33
    It's amazing.
    June 20th, 2007 at 07:16pm
  • Sixties-Child

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    As expected it was marvellous.

    By the way who is the actress you are using the photographs? She's very beautiful.

    Looking forward to more. Meanwhile I'm reading your story Shine A Light and loving that too.

    Clap
    June 20th, 2007 at 05:12pm
  • AndTheCowSaidMoo

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    Becka, you win at life! Means I loved it and I suscribed. :D
    Thats about as much as I will say about that.
    xoxo
    June 20th, 2007 at 02:06pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    This is awesome as ever!! It's great, and it follows on in style from the last one. Even better, however, is that the form is less stiff and you've grown as a writer in some mysterious way I never thought possible. As the last one was gob - stoppingly great.
    This has to keep coming. It really does, I'm loving the way the story's progressed and grown to encorporate a sequel. You're doing a great job, Bekka. Please, do keep writing :D:D
    June 20th, 2007 at 01:53pm