The Alley - Comments

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I love it!!!
Havent been reading to many stories lately, but this one i'll make time for.

wow... its got even more conspiracy ish!

XD i love it! its a cool idea =]

Squeep.
YOU UPDATED.

I love it.
Lots.
And that kid's creepy.
He saw a tarp and decided there was a secret club at the school... :S

I could point out a bunch of typos... But I'm not that mean. :)

More soon?
xox

this is awesome! i love it, i love the idea of the alley... write more!

I'm sensing an eerie similarity between you and Jamie...

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Oh YAY!
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I love it :)
And you disposed of some of the 'things'

xox
More soon.

Yeah I did , just for you 'cos I am cool like that XD

Oh YAY!
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I love it :)
And you disposed of some of the 'things'

xox
More soon.

yay!....i was waiting for part 2 of this *subcribes*

mickey soounds cool too
i liike it but im hanging on the edge of my seat!!!
partly cos my cat is on the other half and partly cos i want to no wat the problem is!!!
i like it

I like it. I think I'm going to subscribe to this. I want to know what happens next.

This is really original! i love original stories, they're nicer. I think you left out some punctuation things though. But other than that i can't wait to see what happens next.
It's more interesting to me because it seems more life-like than things like just fan fic or pairings. It's cool, can't wait for updates. XD
=D

Really awesome and very well written. More soon, please!

Wow Emma, that was so awesome and I'm not usually one for non-fan-fics :D
I loved the way you explained the social rankings of everyone in the Alley, Jamie sounds like one cool kid :D
It's a great story, much more original than so many stories on here.

Continue away kiddie, Tony'll be waiting......

haha I love it!
I wish I had an Alley
I will subscribe so continue with it
and that cliffie was just...Gah!
you got to update soon!

nice description

It was kind of an unwritten rule that if you wanted to skip a class, do something you shouldn’t or get something you shouldn’t have then you would go to The Alley.

: O

I loved it. More soon. : D

Nah. I will give you more than that. You've got a really good idea, you've written it lovely-ly and I want to secks it.

._.

Ignore the last comment. :tehe:
Or maybe not...

i like it alot
i actually read it!!
it may have taken me 10 minutes but i read it
its RAD as you people would say
i hope theres more chapters coming

I think you're a great writer, keep going. I think you could do something really good with this story =)

this is amazing. Please keep writing, I love the concept, it's different. Please write more!