A Normal Girl Now In Love With A Vampire Prince - Comments

kayshed (100)

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you plot is a bit unoriginal. but entertaining none the less. you might want to try revising it and formatting it to make it easier to read. and you have alot of gramatical errors. other than that its pretty good

June 3rd, 2011 at 03:32am

Karina101202 (100)

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This is really good and I wanna know what happens in the end so update soon!! =D

July 5th, 2009 at 06:28am

XxOreo_ninjaxX (100)

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*pouty face/crying puppydog eyes* pwezzzzz continue *sniffle*

July 4th, 2009 at 11:26pm

modern mariah. (100)

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A girl at an all boys boarding school filled with vampires? Wow, that is such an original plot. Congrats.

July 3rd, 2009 at 08:41pm

Tambry (100)

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WOOOO! theis story is soooooooooooooooooooooo awemazing! it so awesome :D :) ;) :o :lol:

May 12th, 2009 at 11:59pm

Cursed_Angel1996 (100)

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alex is really just a person in it i decided to put in he'll be in it more in the future

February 26th, 2009 at 08:32pm

Switchfan (100)

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Who is Alex? I'm really confused. It's pretty good though. You might want to type it up on Microsoft Word then use spell check. Just a simple suggestion. :P

February 23rd, 2009 at 11:53pm

Vampires rock (100)

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hey i love it can't wait for you to post more

February 20th, 2009 at 02:48pm

Cursed_Angel1996 (100)

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well 1. i am confussed bout the story lol
2. yea it is vampires
3.they wan't to kiss her? well you'll find out
4. I have the sotry all rittien up on ma laptop it's finished so i post more soon

February 15th, 2009 at 02:57am

Switchfan (100)

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OMG! I read the last chapter and just realized that the entire school is made of vampires! Right? Maybe? Haha. But is her Uncle? And why di he bring her to the school?

February 15th, 2009 at 01:21am

Switchfan (100)

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I don't understand why everyone wants to kiss her. The names are confusing too. Sorry for this, but it is really good. Who does she end up with, because right now I'm uber confused. :?:

February 15th, 2009 at 01:17am