I Left My Heart in Moscow but My Love Waits in Pittsburgh - Comments

  • Ayannaxx.

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    Please please please please please continue I love this story your a great writer so yes please continue
    August 26th, 2012 at 04:01pm
  • kateerose12345

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    I love this story and I think you should continue it too :):)
    August 26th, 2012 at 04:01pm
  • Dagger88

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    I think you should continue it!! i love this story so much :)
    August 26th, 2012 at 03:59pm
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    I hope I don't sound like a bitch too much, but I felt like the ending was a letdown. I mean you had so much romance and drama going on between these three, and then suddenly she sees Jordan in the crowd for her show, he's backstage afterwards and all is forgiven? I mean I understand that him being there is a big deal and all because this was her premiere in America, but the way you had woven this story was so amazing and complex that it grabs people, but the ending, it just doesn't feel like it fits.

    Sorry if I come off like a bitch. I just fell inlove with this story and loved seeing a new update email and this ending just doesn't feel like it really tie everything together. Again sorry if I sound like a bitch in my message.
    August 26th, 2012 at 08:20am
  • kateerose12345

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    I'm soo glad Jordan showed up! :) It made me really happy and I can't wait for the next update to see what Jordan's going to say! Sometimes I think I forget that these stories aren't real...
    August 20th, 2012 at 03:06am
  • lovely0428

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    Amazing update, once again:)
    What's Jordan gonna say to her?!?
    August 19th, 2012 at 06:53am
  • Marinesister92

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    oh my goodness, all the chaos being described back there made me really interested, i didn't even care that it could be the most boring thing in the world, but i wanted to know what happened. and then to see that he was there made me just go yes! I want them to work so badly that i feel like i know her and feel her pain. love it.
    -S
    August 18th, 2012 at 05:50am
  • vany262

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    Wow this chapter was amazing. Enjoy reading this story everytime and hope you update soon!
    August 18th, 2012 at 03:53am
  • Penguins11

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    LOVED this chapter!! It made me miss dancing SOO much - it's been two years since I've been onstage for a dance competition or recital and this story always makes me miss it!

    And YEAH! JORDAN CAME!! :) I was worried for a bit there that he wouldn't show up, but they are too perfect for each other to stay apart!
    August 18th, 2012 at 02:19am
  • FleuryVersteeg

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    Omg! That was just fantastic!! I don't know a whole lot about dance, but while reading this, I can clearly picture everything (cause I've studied cause I love watching dancers lol). The little girl was just precious... and the ending- perfect!
    August 17th, 2012 at 04:57pm
  • leecasper17

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    Great update. I loved the descriptions in this chapter. <3
    August 17th, 2012 at 02:51pm
  • saudade.

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    Aw, poor Sveta. Jordan needs to get his head out of his ass! Just saying...

    But this was so good to read. As a dancer, it's frustrating to read stories that have to do with dancing where the author obviously knows nothing about what it really is like.

    And haha, there are 11 recomendations. Jordan's number!
    August 17th, 2012 at 02:09pm
  • FleuryVersteeg

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    LOVED! As always. Haha.
    July 31st, 2012 at 09:39pm
  • Marinesister92

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    I love it a lot it got a little confusing with the constant switches of point of view. But at the same time having you not say that it was one character right off the bat made me really get into the detail and really allow myself to fall into the story.
    July 29th, 2012 at 04:10pm
  • leecasper17

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    This was a really good chapter. Please update soon! I'm writing a Jordan Staal Story too if you want to read it - Forever
    July 28th, 2012 at 05:22am
  • Emmy2550

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    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!~
    July 27th, 2012 at 11:03pm
  • Penguins11

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    OH MY GOD!

    This chapter was absolute perfection, in every sense of the word. I love this story, and it always excites me whenever I see it's been updated for this exact reason. Your characters never lose their personalities, and no matter what situation you've placed them in they never do anything that would be out of character. It makes them so real and that makes the story even better.

    I love how Jordan was with his parents in this chapter - even over the phone you get an incredible sense of how close his family is - and I loved Henry's advice as well as "I was able to bag your mother so I ain't too shabby myself" - it was the perfect humor to sprinkle in with this chapter! And Sveta finally talking to her mother and asking for advice was wonderful too - I understand how hard it can be to get advice like that, because my mom and I are close, but not close at the same time, so it's easy for me to identify with her trepidation at calling her mom.

    And it's true; we'll always miss our mamas
    July 27th, 2012 at 06:47pm
  • kateerose12345

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    Love love love! :) great chapter!
    July 27th, 2012 at 03:45pm
  • saudade.

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    Ahhhhh! So glad to read this! I loved the new update! I've got high hopes for Sveta and Jordan! Can't wait for more!! Very Happy
    July 27th, 2012 at 02:37pm
  • Emmy2550

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    Im anxious as to how Sveta and Jords relationship will end! She needs to get the fudge over Evgeni!
    July 15th, 2012 at 07:54pm