Awww poor guys. They are so stupidly possessive sometimes. I wish Jordan would get over the fact that she was in love with Evgeni and trust in her love enough to be happy with her. I know it is still a shock to him and he still might be processing it and all that but he needs to know that it doesn't change what they have. It just changes who she was before they were together. It shouldn't matter to him because by the time he found out she already had new people in her life to effect her and change her again. He changed her mind about everything and she is willing to over look both their pasts to look forward to their futures and he should too. She should have the same effect on him if he really loved her which I believe he does. He just needs to get out of his own head. I love it keep going!
OMG! I almost went to University of Pittsburgh for Athletic Training! But I chose a different school instead. I still kinda wish I went there, but I'm happy where I'm at. Maybe I'll transfer my last year or something, haha.
Anyways, great update! I feel bad for them both, cause I understand where they both are coming from :/ Don't doubt yourself, girl! You got this!
And btw I agree with Colby_Armstrong9 - I think she's starting to move on and choose Jordan over Evgeni - and she didn't really do anything wrong either, sometimes the characters really do decide where their story goes. Sometimes you plan a huge fight and they decide that it's just not happening; I've had that happen before! Just go with whatever feels right to you and your characters - It will be amazing!
If the fight scene isn't turning out well then maybe it doesn't have to be a fight? She hasn't done anything wrong that I remember. I think she is on the road to recovery from her relationship with Evgeni and she is really trying to have a successful relationship with Jordan. She proves that by throwing out pictures of her and Evgeni. All they might have to do is talk it out and her to be honest with him.
He has reason to be mad that she came to America for another man, but she chose him in the end so it shouldn't matter. He should trust her to be with him and to love him now. He shouldn't have concern for her past. I hope that was helpful! The story is awesome! I love it!
Dude! Update please. I keep checking and there's nothing there and it crushes my dreams lol. I love the story so much! It is well written and has a great idea behind it. I'd be so grateful for more! :)
So glad you're back and so happy for an update. Your English is fine, a few typos but it was nothing huge. I love your writing and am on edge to see what will be happening next :) <3