March 21st, 2009 at 04:06pm
wow, I wonder what Laura will be doing now. :shock: things just keep piling up and they make me wonder. Its all so awesome :D Is Kate going to find about Laura later?
DRAMA!!!
xoXO
zilly
Haunting Hour?! I watched it! It's awesome! I like the girl!
- zillaidma:
- What a jerk. Max saying that to Michael. "Why don't you ask Kat? She's your girlfriend afterall." He could have said it differntly so it would've sounded less harsh =/
*slaps him imaginatively*
I love what it says on the other side of the brush! :D I think that if it were a movie or something like you want it to be, that would be a very famous quote :D *squeals* Its like bring fantasy to life!!! :)
Thou Shall Bring Life
Beneath The Fake, Lies The Real
Whoa : The old man sells something then decides to leave. Excellent! I believe this adds mystery to your story!! :D It gives the reader a lock in the brain of curositiy to see what will happen next! :D :D That is awesome! *high fives*
The way the man sold the brush and decides to move away reminds me of the movie The Haunting Hour
But I think this one would be a better movie if it got to be one :D
That's sad. Kate doesn't have time for Michael. Does she even like him???? @,@
Uh-oh...Raffael will be doing evil deeds, right? @__@ Well, that's what i think since you said he's always been jealous of Michael being the favorite. This adds more drama. WHEEE!!! *squeals in delight*
Whoa..I wonder if Michael will use the drawing of the girl to jealous Kate...hee hee hee
I am beginning to like this story. i shal subscribe :)
WHEEE!!!
Though, it was a bit hard to read the story towards the end because of the orange background touching the words. And also the font.
But all in all, I love your story *thumbs up, claps, and throws roses, confetti, and cooked rice!*
xoXO
zilly
don't worry.. I'll update as soon as i can.. I can't reveal my secret!