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  • Lightning Zap

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    ^^ :o Thanks :D
    January 29th, 2008 at 12:50am
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    I'm just gonna say WOW and then say that I'm on my way t the sequel!!!! :)
    January 29th, 2008 at 12:31am
  • Lightning Zap

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    Rofl, thanks for re-reading, and thanks for finding those mistakes. It's motivated me to fix those up sooner rather than later...

    I'm off to the interview now. :S
    January 14th, 2008 at 01:03am
  • Captain John Hart

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    ^^^ that was my 22nd ramble on here so heres another one just because I want to ramble!
    I loved re-reading this, it's one of the best ways to spend two days!
    <333
    January 13th, 2008 at 10:45pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    I finally finished it!!!!!
    WOOP! It took me most hours of 2 days but I did it!
    Woo! Frank and Gerard told everyone and gained new fans!
    That was a cute place to end this. It wasn't dramactic or anything but it was good. It showed all the love they have for ech other.
    This will be my last rambling comment on here (I think)
    I'll start reading MSF tomorrow.
    I am finding a strange liking for the background to this.
    I'll go leave rambles on MSF tomorrow.
    I hope you did well in your interview!
    January 13th, 2008 at 10:43pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 92 - *does happy dance* Gerard and Frank are together again! woo!!!
    you've made me really hyper now!
    But it's ok cause your writing rocks!
    amazing make up seck!
    January 13th, 2008 at 06:03pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 87 - *does happy dance* Yay Eliza is no longer fucking with Gerard's mind and using him.
    Tehe Bob was dancing like a girl. Tehe. Funny mental picture i have of Bob now.
    January 13th, 2008 at 04:24pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 82 - I swear I would kill Gerard if I hadn't read this before.
    He would be very dead meat.
    Poor Mikey and Alicia having their wedding night ruined by Gerard asking Eliza to marry him
    January 13th, 2008 at 04:10pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 80- I just read it and I'm actually starting to cry.
    I just want to jump in to this and lock them both in a room till they make up. *prepares to jump* but I kind of remember what happens so I wont.
    January 13th, 2008 at 04:01pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 79- Grr Eliza had to ruin everything. Stupid Gerard for not realising that she would only cause trobble and fights between him and Frank.
    Poor Frank, his heart will be breaking in-two. *cries*
    Not the best way to start/end a year.
    January 13th, 2008 at 03:56pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 73- grr Eliza, not good. I'm starting to remember what happens ans I really don't like it. Grrr.
    I really like it the way you make Frank sound jealous.
    January 13th, 2008 at 03:33pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Tehe I got 500th comment and 26th page and 950th post!*page claim*
    Chapter 63 - not good Mikey, why couldn't you have talked to someone?
    with im should it be him?
    Poor Gerard, he feels hopeless about the Mikey thing.
    Mikey- your not worthless, Alicia loves you, Gerard loves you (brotherly), and the guys love you like a friend.
    January 13th, 2008 at 02:08pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 60 - *does happy dance* Yay Gerard's dad accepts him and Frank!!!!
    wooop!
    Yay Gerard and Frank moved in together.
    Not good that Gerard got kicked out though but it meant that him and Frank could live together YAY! *more happy dancing*
    January 13th, 2008 at 01:18pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 52 - Be pulled on me should it be he?
    coudl is it could?
    Frank's mom -grrr not good, poor Frank felt so bad he went back to Gerards.
    I feel kind of bad finding mistakes in this *looks guilty*
    January 13th, 2008 at 12:52pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 50 - That wasn't very nice of Bert to acuse Gerard of lying but I guess he's still upset about the Gerard and Frank thing.
    Bert = :(
    Gerard= XD (sometimes Naughty )when with Frank + :( when Bert can't forgive him.
    WOOP!!! Half way through this!!!!
    I forgot how good this was but it's not as good as Beating.
    January 12th, 2008 at 11:55pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    Broken-Freakshow:
    Hello my lovely.I'm bored so I have decided my mission is going to be to read this again. I will ocasionally ramble at you on random updates.

    I have a question - in chapter 4 "Was that before school when i touched your ass or are you talking about the lessons." should there not be a question mark at the end?
    I could be wrong cause I suck at english but....
    I can't remember what I was going to say (see more ramblings from me)
    Broken-Freakshow:
    Chapter 21 - I was surprised Mikey had never walked in on us, or heard us tehe if you wrote this now with your picking on Mikey moods he probably would have heard them and Gerard would have to make us some lame ass excus.

    I have an other question. I too him in my mouth. should it be took?
    I am randomly finding stuff that could be right or wrong. I'm just bored so I'm reading slower than normal.
    Haha, Yeah, I read the story again a little while ago too. There are tonnes of grammatical and spelling errors. I've just gotta find the time to read through all the chapters and fix them.

    Lol thanks for reading this again :D
    January 12th, 2008 at 11:00pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 33- stupid Gerard knowing he's hurting Bert by being with him when he loves Frank but still sleeping with Bert.
    Aww it was cute that Frank kept the piture Gerard drew of him when they first got togther.
    Stupid Gerard for running away after kissing Frank, it's going to hurt Bert and Frank in different ways.
    January 12th, 2008 at 09:23pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 32- Gerard death stare Tehe that made me laugh.
    Poor Jamia feeling like something is going in about her that she doesn't know about.
    Aww poor Gerard being rejected but he probably was drunk so it can't have hurt him as much, it would have hurt more if he was sober.
    *shakes head* stupid boys not telling the other that they still love each other.
    January 12th, 2008 at 09:17pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 26- Gerard you stupid f*ck!
    Frank and Bert don't deserved to be messed with like that.
    The only good things in that were your amazing writing (yet again) and that Mikey is ok with Gerard and Frank being together.
    *runs off to read more*
    Tehe that is the 9th comments I've left you since I started reading this again
    January 12th, 2008 at 07:37pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 21 - I was surprised Mikey had never walked in on us, or heard us tehe if you wrote this now with your picking on Mikey moods he probably would have heard them and Gerard would have to make us some lame ass excus.

    I have an other question. I too him in my mouth. should it be took?
    I am randomly finding stuff that could be right or wrong. I'm just bored so I'm reading slower than normal.
    January 12th, 2008 at 07:24pm