^^ :o Thanks :D
January 29th, 2008 at 12:50am
- Broken-Freakshow:
- Hello my lovely.I'm bored so I have decided my mission is going to be to read this again. I will ocasionally ramble at you on random updates.
I have a question - in chapter 4 "Was that before school when i touched your ass or are you talking about the lessons." should there not be a question mark at the end?
I could be wrong cause I suck at english but....
I can't remember what I was going to say (see more ramblings from me)
Haha, Yeah, I read the story again a little while ago too. There are tonnes of grammatical and spelling errors. I've just gotta find the time to read through all the chapters and fix them.
- Broken-Freakshow:
- Chapter 21 - I was surprised Mikey had never walked in on us, or heard us tehe if you wrote this now with your picking on Mikey moods he probably would have heard them and Gerard would have to make us some lame ass excus.
I have an other question. I too him in my mouth. should it be took?
I am randomly finding stuff that could be right or wrong. I'm just bored so I'm reading slower than normal.