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  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 20- Yay first gig!
    Woo Mikey and Alicia got together!
    Awsomeness. Now Bob and Ray are the only people not with some one
    January 12th, 2008 at 07:18pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    I like chapter 17 very much. Tehe.
    It was cute that Frank told Gerard he loved him without thinking.
    It was cute of Gerard to reasure Frank that he was ok when Frank was nervous of hurting him
    January 12th, 2008 at 07:10pm
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    Chapter 15- slept for 15 hours. sleeping that long is good, any kind of sleep is good.
    Yay Gerard found it in himself to throw away his razor! woop for him
    January 12th, 2008 at 06:44pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 14- "Don't worry dude, i was talking about you, not to you." Tehe. Brillant line. I don't know how you can make up some little thing like that, that makes me laugh all the time. Tehe.
    January 12th, 2008 at 06:23pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 13- Stupid Gerard getting drunk and kissing some random guy in front of Frank. Grr and the guy Gerard was kissing had to be a complete a**hole calling Bob when they were growing up.
    Poor Bob, he's not fat *hugs Bob*
    It was kind of harsh for Frank to say 'I hate you' to Gerard but I supose Gerard deserved it, especially cause he was with Frank and no one knew.
    It must have been hard for Frank watching Gerard and not yell at him, that would have made everything go to sh*t.

    Like my random comments? Even if you don't I'm still going to leave them for you because you're still alsleep and there is nothing that you can do about them! Tehe
    January 12th, 2008 at 06:19pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Chapter 8 - "Oh god you are in love with your art teacher aren't you?"
    tehe. if Frank was an art teacher then the answer to that is yes.
    Frank could be an art teacher of sorts, they have marial arts teachers so why not have love-teacher. *rolls on floor giggling*
    January 12th, 2008 at 06:00pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    Hello my lovely.I'm bored so I have decided my mission is going to be to read this again. I will ocasionally ramble at you on random updates.

    I have a question - in chapter 4 "Was that before school when i touched your ass or are you talking about the lessons." should there not be a question mark at the end?
    I could be wrong cause I suck at english but....
    I can't remember what I was going to say (see more ramblings from me)
    January 12th, 2008 at 05:43pm
  • CATATONIC

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    wow i just finished reading this and id like to say.

    YOURE AN AMAZING WRITER
    and i liked the twists and turns you took XD
    November 24th, 2007 at 12:02am
  • Toro's Way

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    Thank you so much for this story, while in hospital it gets boring and so arghbut reading this made things so much better!
    Its so well written and awesome, perfect ending! Apart from Punky dieing :( awww poor wittle hamster!
    Ill read the sequel now :D
    tehehe i love you for this story!
    xxx
    October 27th, 2007 at 06:18pm
  • PaigeyPantsFTW

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    ahah
    *new reader*
    luff it!
    and im only on chapter 3 O_O
    lol i have something awesome to read for a while now :)
    October 24th, 2007 at 10:50am
  • Toro's Way

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    Im up to chapter 89 and am loving it!!!
    Omg that whole Eliza thing so annoyed me >:( but yay shes gone :P

    xxx
    October 21st, 2007 at 06:29pm
  • ray_toro_is_hot

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    new reader!! i loved this story it was so sweet and cute and sad sometimes and just overall hot!!!!! Clap i am gonna read your sequal next i just thought i would let you know i loveed this story!!! :mrgreen:
    October 15th, 2007 at 08:13pm
  • Alice Verney

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    wow this is awesome
    October 2nd, 2007 at 08:04am
  • Toro's Way

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    I just started reading this story
    And its so close to the truth , it makes it amazing
    I started this today and am up to chapter 65 and am addicted.
    Im coming back to read the rest tomorow and then the prequel!!
    You are and amazing writer
    xxx
    October 1st, 2007 at 05:46pm
  • Captain John Hart

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    i just finished reading this!

    i love it!

    i will read the squel!
    September 19th, 2007 at 04:04am
  • Nick Green

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    arrrrg! i just finished reading this wholeee story.
    it's completely amazing.
    i've cried in sadness, in happiness, and in anger.
    this fanfic is the complete package of Frerard.
    simple amazing. i SO cried when Gerard proposed to Eliza though. i cried for a while. haha. aw, but, i loved the story and now i'm off to read the sequal [:
    x.
    September 18th, 2007 at 12:05pm
  • karenlee

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    Just started only on 23, I LIKE IT!! ^_^
    September 16th, 2007 at 01:43am
  • killingcupid

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    Awesome fucking story man! i'm going to read the sequal now haha!
    September 14th, 2007 at 06:20am
  • Captain John Hart

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    *new reader*
    i am only on chapter 50 but i love it!

    i will read the rest then the squell but now i have to go to bed :(

    :P
    September 14th, 2007 at 04:35am
  • Catastrophic Corie;;

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    OMGEE!! I loved this story to the maxx!
    Im soo happy theres a sequal!! Gonna go read it now!!
    September 13th, 2007 at 08:40am