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  • the god of thunder.

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    You should have told me you put this up, but that... that doesn't matter anymore.
    Just. Just. MY GOD. My fucking God.

    I could repeat time and time and fucking time again.
    Cussing until my mouth is so filled with soap I'm poisoned.
    Stammering until I forget how to just fucking talk.

    :cheese: But oh my fucking fucking fucking God.
    This story. It hit me like a rocket. Woke me up. Made me yell.
    God. What the fuck do I use to expalin?
    It was... the impact... shit. It just blasted me back in the face.

    It really did.
    It burned my soul.
    Burned my face.
    Burned any trace of thought.
    I expected it to be amazing but. :cheese: God. This is just... fucking... life changing. (Not even the word.)*

    *It really made me cry. Or something like that.
    Not because it was sad. Or because it was cute,. Out of such impact.
    March 1st, 2009 at 11:35am
  • The Color Abi

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    I really enjoyed it
    The emotion that was used, amazing
    The fact she didn't realise they'd caught fire - amazing idea

    I find Science makes me want to write about fires - my science teacher's so goanna slaughter me when she reads my stoires that I've written in my work book...
    February 27th, 2009 at 11:49pm
  • harlequin.

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    lol. spanish class. i pwnt mrs. d'apolito today. we were talking about grammar and she says "yeah, i had one student who did real well in school but always said 'like' and used poor grammar." and i'm like " ...you mean she did very well in school.":coffee:

    and it was definitely noria.
    In Love i just adore that word/name/whatever. and the fact that it means ferris wheel is just so...ack<3

    anywaiii~

    like a blazing inferno. Fires streaking across and melting the sedating blue we call day.
    i enjoyed the fire references. foreshadowing, ftw.

    igniting the flesh beneath.
    see above.

    I pull the bleach blond boy behind me and lock us into cart number six. Six has been my favorite number since I was really young;
    ;_; it reminded me of wildwood and i sorta kinda started to tear a bit.[/lame]

    At that point, it doesn’t matter that he may be disgusted and offended.

    At that point, it doesn’t matter that he’s kissing back and my heart is on the brink of exploding.

    At that point, it doesn’t even matter how much the car is rocking or that were at the very, very top and the sunset is fading.
    i love repetition. especially when it's done very well and in a non-annoying fashion like this. all of them are related yet not related. the same moment, different feelings. eh, i probably make no sense but y'know.

    And since we’re cliché little teenagers, we figure this is just what a first kiss feels like. The searing pain layering your body from head-to-toe and the sweat pouring and the boiling blood; it’s all utterly normal.

    As if a first kiss is supposed to feel like you’re being burnt alive.
    wow wow we wow. i loved that. it's so true. it makes them so naive. it gives them an excuse. it's wonderful.

    Then and only then did it occur to me that we’re actually on fire.
    oh gosh, so vague. i loved it. just sort of a sporadic little "oh yeah, and by the way we were legit on fire." sort of thing. very nice. and mysterious. 'tis wonderful.

    i loved it. it was so great and fiery and gah.

    however, i didn't particularly enjoy the ending :| but that's okay. i just thought it was sort of... i dunno, expected. but i also sort of liked it. how so-and-so doesn't even care because he's so wrapped up in the moment. i found it to be sort of sugary, though. but you know me, i'm like an anti-romantic and all so its like "EW. LOVE. DNW." but it most likely came off as intensely cute and a perfect ending to someone a lot less cynical.
    isitlamethatipicturedittobemarthxlinkatfirst? x)
    February 27th, 2009 at 01:38am
  • villain.

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    Intended to be a quert, but it can really be anybody that you imagine.
    I don't even know where this came from, something about sitting in spanish class makes me want to write about ferris wheels catching fire. :tehe:

    Feedback is very much appreciated. In Love :arms:
    February 25th, 2009 at 10:56pm
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