September Is For.. - Comments

  • Lyddy Cool

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    wow... this is amazing!! i love it =]
    November 7th, 2007 at 12:22am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    i thought i left a comment a few moments ago, but apparently I didn't, so I'll leave one again.
    When it was the last day of September, I remember writing at the top of the page in my compostion book, "Don't worry, Billie. September's almost over."
    Mainly because these exact thoughts were going through my mind.

    The way you have written it is so beautiful. You have such an ability and seems as though you are only at the beginning of your potential.

    Usually, when people think of Billie and his rebel days... they believe that he honestly wanted that life and he thought it was truly exhilarating.
    But- you have taken that idea and turned it around. I'm sure that at a point in his life, he had that sort of breakdown- where he knew that he was going nowhere because he continued to do useless things.

    This really played the strings of my heart... for lack of a better phrase.
    Nice, nice.
    October 9th, 2007 at 05:15am
  • cheer up charlie

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    Cry normally, I don't like fanfics, but that was really good.
    It was so sad, and I loved the way through out the story you had those:
    September is for [insert feeling etc. here]

    That's all I have to say... wow.

    Clap In Love
    September 30th, 2007 at 08:56pm
  • Bassists Are Sexy

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    Wow.

    My eyes are tearing and I have never cried over a fan fiction before. That was so beautiful.
    September 16th, 2007 at 03:14pm
  • iliveontightwadhill

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    i think this is really good. its full of emotion, how can you not get caught up in this story. I love it. your really good at writing
    September 4th, 2007 at 05:37pm
  • tyler farr.

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    wow, that was GREAT!

    your a great writer! =]
    September 2nd, 2007 at 12:47am
  • dr. faustus

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    Holy shit!
    That was...great I loved how you made billie so human and not like other fanfics were he just some perfect angel. This is beyond a fanfic when I was reading this I could even think of billie you know the dark hair, geen eyed man. I saw someone else. The emotion was deep, clean, and raw. You have a way with words that seem so perfect together. September for me wasn't something to remember (9-11) you know, but I loved this one shot. The ending seemed like it sumed everything up. Congrats.

    September is for memories also.
    August 21st, 2007 at 03:50pm
  • HiddenInShadows

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    O...M...G.
    *cries histerically*
    That was beautiful. I've never read anything like it!
    I love it so much!
    Please write more stories!
    July 3rd, 2007 at 05:05am
  • A Tear Shed

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    *sobs* That-was-BEAUTIFUL! Pleeeeeaaaaase update soon!
    July 1st, 2007 at 07:59pm
  • Syd Barrett.

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    This is such a great story. You've got to continue this. It's really terrific writing.
    June 29th, 2007 at 10:07pm
  • gdaywolfbane

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    Really good and very emotional. I was glad I found this and read it, because it truly is an amazing piece, so keep up the good work. I really loved the theme and the recurring line that honesty is a virtue.
    June 29th, 2007 at 06:31pm
  • The Way

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    September Is For...

    Oh. Wow. I'm teary-eyed right now. You've only posted a couple of stories but you're effing consistent, or better yet, improving with every piece you write. And I could actually recognize your writing style, which is rare except in a few exceptional authors here. It's a very good sign, you know. This was like a confession of sorts, a monologue, and I love them (half of why I do is because I always write them, but that's beside the point) so I loved this. You topped yourself after Mantra of Lies. Great job, I mean it. ;)

    Btw, wonderful use of the title and the story's theme. :D
    June 29th, 2007 at 02:43pm
  • xx-kiss_me_deadly-xx

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    OMG!This is sooo sad:'(...but it's really good!!!great job..it almost mad me cry!!
    June 29th, 2007 at 12:08am
  • Cello.

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    Oh, wow, Kayla. LIke I said, this is one of the best fanfics ever. I love the whole "September is For..." theme. It made the story almost have this poetic feel to it. Great job, as usual. I almost cried towards the end... Cry
    June 28th, 2007 at 08:07pm