i thought i left a comment a few moments ago, but apparently I didn't, so I'll leave one again. When it was the last day of September, I remember writing at the top of the page in my compostion book, "Don't worry, Billie. September's almost over." Mainly because these exact thoughts were going through my mind.
The way you have written it is so beautiful. You have such an ability and seems as though you are only at the beginning of your potential.
Usually, when people think of Billie and his rebel days... they believe that he honestly wanted that life and he thought it was truly exhilarating. But- you have taken that idea and turned it around. I'm sure that at a point in his life, he had that sort of breakdown- where he knew that he was going nowhere because he continued to do useless things.
This really played the strings of my heart... for lack of a better phrase. Nice, nice.
normally, I don't like fanfics, but that was really good. It was so sad, and I loved the way through out the story you had those: September is for [insert feeling etc. here]
Holy shit! That was...great I loved how you made billie so human and not like other fanfics were he just some perfect angel. This is beyond a fanfic when I was reading this I could even think of billie you know the dark hair, geen eyed man. I saw someone else. The emotion was deep, clean, and raw. You have a way with words that seem so perfect together. September for me wasn't something to remember (9-11) you know, but I loved this one shot. The ending seemed like it sumed everything up. Congrats.
Really good and very emotional. I was glad I found this and read it, because it truly is an amazing piece, so keep up the good work. I really loved the theme and the recurring line that honesty is a virtue.
Oh. Wow. I'm teary-eyed right now. You've only posted a couple of stories but you're effing consistent, or better yet, improving with every piece you write. And I could actually recognize your writing style, which is rare except in a few exceptional authors here. It's a very good sign, you know. This was like a confession of sorts, a monologue, and I love them (half of why I do is because I always write them, but that's beside the point) so I loved this. You topped yourself after Mantra of Lies. Great job, I mean it. ;)
Btw, wonderful use of the title and the story's theme. :D
Oh, wow, Kayla. LIke I said, this is one of the best fanfics ever. I love the whole "September is For..." theme. It made the story almost have this poetic feel to it. Great job, as usual. I almost cried towards the end...