March 13th, 2009 at 11:08pm
Aww....damn Jamie.
That was really sort of tension filled. You could really feel the awkwardness Jamie was feeling as he worried about how and when to tell his dad, which his dad didn't really seem to pick up on.
I loved the description of Lee. How Jamie just couldn't not talk about him and given any chance he'd go on and on until he couldn't speak anymore about this boy that just seemed to lighten up his life. The hint of sexual content was nice too.
Very...classy though. Just mentioned. S'nice.
It sounded like Jamie was normaly ok with his dad, felt he could tell him things, so maybe now that he just couldn't find the courage to talk about this issue was also what made it feel weird? ... Or maybe he just finds it awkward.
I liked that this was rather simple. Just basically a car journey, but it shows how much can really happen that you don't notice. You can't tell what someone is thinking during some rather normal silence like when in a car. Wow, kinda...off topic here XD
Anyway. I liked how well the title fitted too. Driving Nowhere...and the conversation really wasn't going anywhere either. Like Jamie was getting no nearer telling his dad no matter how hard he tried.
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Poor sod. :arms:
Awesomly written ^__^
xxx
Your writing style is extreamly good, and I liked the concept of such a simple situation having the chance to become something else.
I don't know if this comment makes much sense, I'm rather tired :XD
But I really enjoyed it (:
Keep writing!