It's written very well, and I already like the situation. Not to mention the fact that I love Fred and George...
There were a couple of spelling mistakes, and one where you wrote "madder" instead of "matter", but they weren't like "misses weesly and frEd and jorj wer relaytid" or something ...
So. I'm subscribing, and waiting for chapter two! .
[And chapter three and four and five and six and seven and eight and nine and ten etc etc etc.]
I love this. Really.
It's like ... wow.
It's written very well, and I already like the situation. Not to mention the fact that I love Fred and George...
There were a couple of spelling mistakes, and one where you wrote "madder" instead of "matter", but they weren't like "misses weesly and frEd and jorj wer relaytid" or something ...
So. I'm subscribing, and waiting for chapter two!
[And chapter three and four and five and six and seven and eight and nine and ten etc etc etc.]