okay. all sweet and good and cheeryness! but! OH MY DEAR WORD. BEN. STOP FIGHTING. you're not only killing Evelyn, you're killing me! I mean, I know what happens and I'm still reading and gasping and clenching my stomach! oh my word forget Evelyn crying I'm about to die over here! thankfully he's healthy. and alive. and okay. and they have THE talk the talk and they're sweaty and she's all over him and they do IIIITTTTTT and wooooo, bow chica bow wow! ;D
THE FIRST KISS! and a HOT one! and a little jealousy from Ben, seeing James there? and FINALLY together omg. the wedding sounds so cute, I can so see them dancing and swaying and becoming official (officially) and purple dress sounds yummmmyyy. and I loved the line, "you couldn't kiss me when I was ... CONSCIOUS?" ahhaha, that's so cuteeee! :)
oh fliiiiiipping snap! if I hadn't have been able to go chapter to chapter these past ones with the fight and her & Wiz & hten the make up and then the girl, I would have gone CRAZY. just the mere minutes to read was killing me! ahhhh such suspense. you write it very well :) and you pulled me in and had me gasping and going craaaaazy! I mean, I get so wrapped up in your stories that I just completely lose touch with reality. and the make up. awwwww :) she's the only one he wants to go with him! so sweet! haha.
AHHH NEW YEARS. cheesey cute ness :) & he didn't even remember their first kiss! :( but he did smile. so 'dorbs. and I'm the same way with Leah, the shrilling & shrieking over guyssss (who's ALSO hockey players .. haha. I think I woke the dead when she started telling me about Murph :P) and the poor thought of Ben having to go out to eat with 4 girls! hahahah oh goodness. dude. I definitely wanna skate with the team. and dance on the ice to Abba. NOT fair. but poor Ben! my heart broke for him :(
aaaaawwwwwwhhhhh! the lights! & cold! & dinner! & Ben doing *just fine* at keeping her warm :) hehehe. I don't know this Wizzer kid (Leah's slacking! haha) but dang, slap in the faceeee why don'tcha!? hahaa. and the concussion :( awwhhh, poor Ben! BUT. little miss Evelyn is doing just fine at making him feel better :) & they're just so, SO sweet together!
sigh. I want to (eventually) marry a wallet forgetter. and now that I'm going back and re-reading this, I lovelovelove their little moments in the cafe with the older woman. and how she 'told' him she knew he was a hockey player was cuuuuute! hahaha. & I wouldn't let him live it down either :P AND I WANT A NOT EVEN RELEASED JERSEY. ahha js. envioussss. and I mean, lets carry on a full convo while I'm in the penalty box! hahah I'm sitting here outside of class smiling like an idiot re-reading this, sipping my frapp & listening to Five For Fighting and I'm sure I look stupid but I don't care cause it's *so* flipping amaaaazing! *sigh* :)
ahhhh! chapter 2! I love love loved this one. & the surprise of oh hey I have a professional hockey players wallet! & HE'S CALLING ME! okay I'd like pass out hahaha.
This is great, i'm so happy i found it haha. I've subbed a few of your other stories, you're a fantastic writer. I'm super excited to read the other two parts of this! :)
just read the story. im in love. && that means a lot coming from valtteri filppula's # 1 fan. [not really, but i am basically madly in love with him] Anywaaays: you rock. [=
I just red this whole story and loved it. I can tell you put a lot of time and heart into it. Ben and Evelyn were a adorable couple. You had a wonderful use of imagry through out the whole story. I'm sad to see it end.
heyy yew sud REALLY write a sequal! like have it years into the future but write it more about there kids... like have 2 boys n a girl... (one boy jocky and one emo) and the girl start to become emo and depressed and stff cause she gets abusied (ect..) heehhee sorry i gets excited...if yew like the storyish line i cud help yew wif it :)
Why does it have to be OVER?! =((((((( I've loved reading every bit of this story, And I'll admit I got a little teary when it was over (I KNOW I KNOW I'M A TOTAL SAPPPPPP) Congratulations on completion though! <33333333333333 youuuuuuuu