Hey, Darling. - Comments

I think the ending was quite cute and can't wait for the sequel!
I don't think you should let us choose the name, because your the one who should think if it fits the plot or something. But I thought Curse or Cure sounded decently okay.

yay for sequels!

Hope you have fun!
looking forward the sequel ^.^

Aww. Well, i'm pretty stoked for the sequel then! Have fun in PA.!!

I am sad that this is over ):
But I am excited for the sequel!!!

This has been such a pleasure to read. I always get excited when I see an email from Mibba saying that it's been updated.

i can't wait til the sequel.
i'm already subscribed to it (:
<3

ok so Ive been out since I read this whole story yesturday
but I just read the three-or-so chapters you put up in this little amount of time and my main reactions were pretty much sneering at the bonnie part and getting up and yelling hooray at the part when garrett bursts through the door and then the end was precious and I aw'd

oh and I loved this story to pieces and if I wasnt eating pizza I wouldve gotten up and celebrated there being a sequel.

I looooooooooove it. xD
That ending was sort of...perfect. I'm glad that they didn't just magically make up, because I don't think that would happen in real life. Even though it wasn't their fairytale happy ending, it was still sort of optimistic. It's given me hope that they'll manage to work things out in the future. x)
I love that he sent her a text message every day without fail. I feel it shows how strongly he feels for her, and how sorry he is for what he's done. It might also make him seem a little selfish, not letting her move on, but I think I can forgive him. Especially as they are so obviously meant to be.
Super excited for the sequel.
You're a brilliant writer - keep it up, honey! xD

There's so many things for me to say, but I feel like i've already said them in previous comments.
First off, this was brilliantly written. Everything was just coherent and eloquent (:
From the descriptions to depicting true feelings acquirely down to a science.
I remember when you told me about this story and it was barely on chapter 4.
The moment i read those chapters, I was hooked. It made me laugh, it made me cry, it made me smile, it made yell at Kennedy for being a doucheface or Molly for being so darn stubborn. haha.
Now to see that the story has ten stars (i think it deserves more than that. more like gazillion) makes me so happy for you :')
I can tell you put your heart and soul into this story, no matter what. Even your filler chapters were amazing. Not many people can say that about their own ;]
Now onto the last chapter. Even after all they've been through i find it civil the way that they talked to each other in the end over the phone.
You'd think it'd be like: "I hate you. Drop dead!" Nope, not at all.
Though it seems painful for Molly to be reminded about Kennedy everytime he sents her the text message of "I love you," it's a sweet reminder.
It shows Kenny cares about her and Molly cares for him.
I think what Molly needs now is space to clear some air for her and start focusing on her life, but of course Kenny's always going to be in her mind.
Can't erase something like what she feels in just a wink of an eye.
I can't believe her teacher actually read that outloud in class. How crude xp
Just needed to state that since it would most definitely be embarassing.
John's a sweetie in this being all dorky/adorable. aha.
Looking forward to reading Crumble and see where you take Molly's and Kennedy's stories.
They're my favorite pairing b/c they've got their share of flaws. More applicable to real life romances than ever.
I love this story so much. It's even given me inspiration for Summer when I think what i've written is crummy. I've actually re-read favorite chapters and i'll probably be doing that a lot now since it's complete.
I couldn't stop thinking about chapter 24 last night, actually. it left an impact on me that no other story has before. You have a gift, my friend. Don't ever give it up and keep up with the amazing work.
[Sorry for the long, massive rant. I can't help but rant]
<333.

ahh im so excited for the sequal!!
I like Winds of Change.

I just read this chapter on my phone because I wanted to read it so bad. I vote Curse or Cure for the title. :D I cannot wait for the sequel! And I'm sorry this is so short, but again, I'm on my phone. All you need to know is that was amazing.

=] I LOVED IT OMJESUS OMJESUS (sorry religious people)
aaaah no it's over :( Ah well sequal yeyeyeyeyey
okay im not usually this irratic
I vote winds of change or something about second chances =]
Laura xox

Now for 25.
Kennedy Brock is being so selfish right now, and I don't like that at all. He shouldn't be texting her and saying he loves her all this time when a) just a few parts ago he was saying him loving her wasn't even enough after all he did to her [and boy was he right] and b) she ended things with him the second Bonnie walked out. He is keeping her from getting the closure that she needs to move on, and it's only going to make things worse. Simply because he's telling her he loves her all this time, his actions are going against the phrase because if he did love her like he said he did, he'd want her happy and wallowing over him for a year is not her being happy. He needs to LET GO, GIVE HER TIME, and WAIT for her to come to him. If she doesn't that's his problem and he's going to have to accept that.
But even then, it's cute that he sent lots to her in a day when he heard that she was happy about them.
I love John and Mia. They're just too cute. And I like John's role in this. He doesn't do a lot, necessarily, but he's there to stand up for her and be there for her even if they aren't entirely close.
As for Kennedy's phone call, I'm not sure if I'm happy or mad about it. He's still being really selfish about how he loves her and all of that, but after all his talk of wanting her to experience, those texts and calls are keeping her from experiencing in life after him. She doesn't date. She holds onto those texts and calls, basking in the knowledge that maybe he does have her on his mind and maybe he misses her and maybe he does love her. But she doesn't do anything in return, and that's kind of selfish of her, too. She needs to make up her mind on what she wants. Sure, maybe she still loves him a bit, but she can't keep leading him on like she is. Intentional or not, because she doesn't answer the calls or text back, he's still thinking he has a chance. Maybe she thinks that that means that he'll give up, but he's too stubborn for that and he'll only continue until she tells him off for it. But she won't do that, because it makes her feel good to have him fawn over her still.
So I guess they're both selfish.
I'm kind of glad that she answered the phone, this time. They needed to talk. It's been a year, she has had time to think things through and not be entirely irrational with her words, and they can actually have an adult conversation. I only hope Kennedy doesn't fill it up with I love you's and I miss you's, because that won't help, kid.
Here's what I think should happen: they get to Tempe, she fulfills her promise to Garrett and they become besties (and that is totally not entirely out of my massive crush on that kid, of course not? haha), and they hang a lot. He helps her realize what she wants/doesn't want with Kennedy. And maybe Kennedy thinks that there's something more and gets jealous or maybe he trusts her or trusts Garrett. But then she leaves, goes to college and I don't even know what should happen with that. I think I'd be okay with them just becoming actual friends, but if something starts up again, you know I'm down for that, too.
As for a title, I like Curse or Cure. Because that's kind of the option of what Kennedy would be to her. He could either make things so much better for her, or he would only bring her down and make her feel inadequate like he has too many times before.
And I don't hate you for this not starting for a while, either. Because, let's face it. Regular updates of Hemmorage or Bittersweet sound SO AWESOME. Especially Hemmorage, because I don't really know much about Caleb, and I think John Ohhh is a cutie pie.
I LOVE YOU AND THIS WAS AMAZING.

It's over! :(
But there's a sequel.
I prefer the title Winds of Change.
I can't wait, by the way.

I personally like winds of change.
And that ending was perfect! It wasn't too sad, but it wasn't all lovey and cutesey.
Can't wait for the sequel!!

Okay, I'm giving you seperate comment for 24 and 25, because you deserve it and let's face it, if I tried to write both at once, it'd take up an entire page.
I LOVE GARRETT NICKELSON.
(sorry, just had to put that out there).
I'm really glad that Mia pulled through and was there for her. And John is too cute. I really want to know what he and Garrett pulled to pay Kennedy back for being such a bitch to her. I'm kind of glad Mia is staying in Arizona, because then for the sequel, we'll have a connection back to her and John, and that'll help.
And now for Garrett. I love love love him. I don't care if Kennedy is going to get mad if he hears what Garrett did (which I doubt he will). I just think its irrevocably sweet that he hears that she's upset and rushes in and kisses her. Because he didn't expect anything from her when he did it, unlike any other guy would, and he just wanted to tell her how he felt. And that's really sweet, too, because right now Molly is feeling so awful and hurt and unloved, and then Garrett sweeps in and is basically the sweetest thing ever by telling her how pretty she is and how much he liked her.
And, I love that you made use of our 'K-man/J-dog' awesomeness!'!!! That had me laughing, even though that was really sad. I'm kind of mad at him for being stupid and calling her when she was leaving, and then texting her with an 'i love you' because that's just really selfish. My assumption is that he came back later that night to be like 'i love you please forgive me' and she was gone, and John or Mia or someone told him that she was going back home and he wanted to be selfish and tell her that he loved her in case that'd change anything.
WELL KENNEDY, IT DOESN'T. SHE'S GONE, YOU FUCKED UP BAD THIS TIME, BOY.
I love how mature Molly is being with this. Yes, she's upset and hurting, but she's past the stage of just being mad at him.I don't think she regrets how the summer went, even if it did hurt, because I think she would rather of had this experience with him and been with him for the time they had than not at all.
OKAY. I LOVE YOU AND YOU'RE AWESOME.
I'm going to go read 25 now :]

It's over! I'm sad to see this one end, except it was a good ending. Actually, I totally would have been fine with you leaving it like that, but I'm glad you're not.'

I can't wait for the sequel! Have fun in Pennsylvania :)

I really enjoyed this story and I'm looking forward to the sequel because I know it will be just as well-written as this was.

Those text messages are adorable.
I wish someone did that more me :tehe:
I vote Winds Of Change

Brilliant chapter.
Poor Molly. =(
Pleeeeease do a sequel?
I will love you forever. xD