Hey, Darling. - Comments

I love this story so much.
I don't want it to end.
Sequel? :cute:

I ABSOLUTLEY LOOOOOOOOVVVEEEE your story! It's amazing!
You're such a talented writer. Even if they don't end up together, this was one of the best stories that I've read on Mibba so far.
You should definitely continue the story with a sequel. I'll be the first to subscrube. :)

Awwww K-man. I know it won't have a happy ending, but what about a sequel? Possibility?

I'd like to tell you how much I absolutely love this. I don't know what to tell you about a sequel. I think I'll have an opinion after this ends. I don't want it to end, but I know it has to.

I liked this one! Even though he was like, 'I don't want to.' & she went all Twilight on Kennedy and was like, 'You don't want me?????@#!'- it was good.

I WANT A SEQUEL!

I cried, again.

Why is Kennedy so idiotic?

Heartbreakingly perfect. Perfect chapter

OF COURSE you have to write a sequel!! I understand negative endings (I've written several) but you need to write a sequel to fix all the fuck ups. Like several years later or something of the sort.

Because otherwise ill be hella sad and i won't write well. And then I'll have to send all my readers to harp to you. And neither of us want that, now do we?
Lol.

All in all a lovely story tho. Bravo =)

<3 KickFlip

i seriously thought i was going to cryy.
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poor molly.

i'm kind of glad you didnt have a happy ending.
i like these endings better.
but i think you should do a sequel :D

You should definitely do a sequel!!
Kennedy's such an idiot >_< a hot idiot though.. haha...

i actually like how much of a screw up he is; it makes him human. people don't usually get a fairytale ending and sometime i wish it was the same for characters in stories like here. i hope you do make a sequel.

You've done it Kaylie. You've actually made me cry and I've never cried over a story on this site before. EVER.
Crying's a positive thing though in reaction to this story. It's beautiful the way you executed the whole scene. My stomach dropped and I think my heart broke a little.
The moment that Bonnie stepped out in his clothes was what ignited the tears.
The way you built it up to that moment made my heart pound on overdrive.
No writer has ever had that effect on me, when i'm actually reacting emotionally to the story. Not even professional authors like my favorites Stephenie Meyer and Jane Austen.
You better publish books one day, girlie. I'll buy every single one of them.
In a way, I saw this coming and deep in the back of my mind I knew a happy ending wouldn't happen, but of course being the optimistic i am, i hoped for the two of them to be together.
I feel bad for both Molly and Kenny. There's just no other way to describe it.
Molly to be willing to overlook what occurred, even if Kenny took her virginity when she was drunk, she looked passed that.
You could tell she loves him so so much that's making me tear up again as i write this. I'm such a baby :')
Then Kennedy who tried to prevent himself from hurting Molly must be wanting to kick himself lots of times.
I don't blame him for making the impulsive decision to sleep with Bonnie b/c he thought it was all over between him and Molly. That he royally screwed up and it can't be turned back.
Both of them had there share of mistakes, but for some crazy optimistic reason I can see a tiny hope of light for them in future, if you plan on writing the sequel of course.
I think it'd be brilliant just as this story was.
Now I'm left to thinking about what will happen in the next few chapters. What else could happen? and whanot.
Okay, I'm going to end my rant right here and tell you these last words.
I LOVE YOU, I LOVE THIS STORY. I JUST LOVE IN GENERAL.
Oh yeah, I can never hate you b/c you're one of my favorite authors on this site (:
<333

Man I love this story. I hate how guys can ne such douches.

I knew that he did something major when he said he didn't deserve her. God, he just cannot stop messing up!
Um, you have my vote for a sequel? haha :cute:

I'm at loss for words.
I really love this story.
I don't want it to end.
The "T" key just feel off my computer.
Therefor, I'll end my comnent here so I can put it back on.
If I can.
:)

I don't hate you.
I don't hate this.
In fact, it was extra-ordinarily well written.
But, it does make me sad.

As soon as you mentioned the word "guilty" I was like; "he slept with someone else, didn't he?".
What a freaking prick.

I feel so bad for Molly. She was finally willing to swallow back her pride, and do what she thought would make her (and him) happy, instead of being so damn cautious the whole time. And what does he do?

He goes and sleeps with Bonnie, of course.

Crushing her heart in the process. =(

On a lighter note;
YAY SEQUEL.
Please do one? That'd be awesome.

Update soon? xD

so i love this a lot.
i finally got the time to comment it! (:
<3

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If I say it enough, does that mean you'll do it? Because I can't live with them having an unhappy ending. I just can't. :(

OH MY GOD.
I LOVEYOU.
See? No hatred here.
This is maybe my favorite part of this entire thing. I don't even know why (okay, who am I kidding? of course I know why: it was amazing and your writing is phenomenal). But it was so hearbreaking and I don't even know who to feel bad for!!!!
I mean, there's Molly, who is willing to look past this and move on, and she loves him so damn much, and so I feel so bad for her when he tells her she deserves better. And then Bonnie steps out of his house, looking freshly sexed, and all of what she thought he felt about her flies out the window, because what kind of guy would say he loves her and then sleep with another girl? And I feel so bad for her.
But then there's Kennedy. And the poor guy is just trying to do the right thing, trying to protect her by telling her that he can't be with her. Because he knows that what he's done was wrong and he knows just how awful it is and feels so bad about it (but that doesn't forgive the fact that he slept with Bonnie, which I'm assuming here he did). And Molly doesn't make that easy for him because she's still fighting for him and he's just given up and instead is fighting for her to be with someone he thinks she deserves because he doesn't think he's worthy after all he's done to hurt her, and all the hurt he knows he'll cause when she found out about Bonnie.
I'm curious to see what these next few chapters have in store. I'm going to take a shot in the dark here and guess that Garrett should make an appearance and comfort her. Or Johnny. Because he's adorable too. And I hope that she'll be okay. And I also hope that Kennedy won't pour salt on her open wound and suddenly be like 'wait, I love you Molly' when she's decided to leave finally.
And, for the ending of this part: HOLY SHIT. That's just incredible, the starting and ending at throwing up in gardens. I can't even describe how much I loved that, really.
I'm going to try to finish 17 for you and Andrea now :]