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  • KillLui

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    This story was so beautiful. So sad.
    But she was right, she wasn't good for him.

    But a sequel would be beautiful as well? :3
    June 8th, 2010 at 01:13am
  • LaurieeLionFace.

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    i was seriously crying, like through the entire ending. ]:
    but this was really really REALLY amazing. and i'd like to thank you for writing one of the most amazing stories i've read on avenged sevenfold. <3333
    October 3rd, 2009 at 01:10am
  • LittleMissRESENTMENT

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    I absolutely adore this story. Please tell me there will be a sequel!
    September 30th, 2009 at 04:47am
  • Freak Out

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    so... no sequel, just heartache? i loved the story, it was different. anyways. yeah.
    September 29th, 2009 at 05:02am
  • cakecoffeeandzombies

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    This...was...wow. This was absolutley amazing. So much information in only eleven chapters! Only a truly fantastic author could convey such strong emotions and keep such a careful plot for such a small period. I was crying at the end, at the tragic affair that went on, but at the same time, smiling at the not-so-tralala-we're-all-always-jolly-good ending. It was such a good change.

    Thank you...for writing this.
    September 29th, 2009 at 02:16am
  • LipstickLullaby!

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    Wow.
    Such a sad ending, but I loved your story!
    You're a great writer.
    =)
    September 28th, 2009 at 11:32pm
  • productionandstyle

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    Wow. What a sad ending. I'm trying hard not to just write a really bland and dry comment like "I loved it" or something, because it wouldn't really sum up how I feel about this story. You did a really fantastic job writing this entire thing, and your portrayal of all of the characters was... phenomenal, to say the least. I can't believe it's over.

    Thanks for letting us have the opportunity to read this, because it was fantastic.
    September 28th, 2009 at 12:03pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Well...I'm not gonna lie...I thought she was really selfish just leaving like that...
    I feel bad for Zacky, Jimmy and Brian
    September 28th, 2009 at 05:25am
  • efflorescxnt

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    oh my god that was sad yet very good...i loved it and hated it...im crying and smiling...wow im fucked up haha but it was a truly great story...u did an awesome job.
    September 28th, 2009 at 04:31am
  • CharmedAngel88

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    Wow, that was pretty freakin' awesome!
    You did an amazing job with this story and you know how much I loved it. I'm glad you had the time to update and finish this story because it was pure awesome.
    September 28th, 2009 at 04:11am
  • evencrayonslaughatme

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    I'm crying.
    Won't lie.
    It was amazing!!!!!!!!!
    and I agree with the comment above, this story was so unique and not cliché in the least, which made it so much better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I loved it so much!!!!
    Amazing job!!!!
    September 28th, 2009 at 03:39am
  • randy orton.

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    i...am crying.
    no seriously i am.
    this is so sad.
    but, i just love how they didnt end up together in the end.
    no cliche-ness in this what-so-ever and I love that <3
    Tiff, you did a fucking amazing job on this.
    Psychos ftw <33333
    September 28th, 2009 at 03:36am
  • randy orton.

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    Imma comment as I read along:

    “And Devin…he only wants the best for me. He-“ Zack was finally able to effectively get a word in after snorting.

    “He wants what’s best for his dick…” He muttered.


    So, of course you showed me this before, but I still laugh when I see it.

    “You know you mean a lot to me, right?” Zack eventually asked.

    I...wow. I love that line. I dunno, but it just held soooo fucking much to me. Like, A LOT. amazing <3

    As he yawned and stretched, Zack’s eyes fluttered open. He’d been awakened when the bed shifted. The first thing he was met with was Tiffany’s eyes staring down at him as she sat up with her legs crossed Indian style.

    “I don’t deserve you…”

    Zack caught on immediately. He pushed his lips off to the side as he sat up. One thing he noticed was that she wasn’t crying. Her face held no emotion. He recognized that look, but he was too tired to put the pieces together.

    “Jesus fucking Christ, Tiff. Stop with all the bullshit. Let me go back to sleep,” He grumbled, lying back down after waving her off. He wasn’t much of a morning person.

    “But it’s already three-“

    “I want to sleep,” Zack snapped, cutting her off.

    So she let him go back to sleep.


    Uhh, idk why, but I found this hilarious...like just the way I pictured it and stuff. Hahaha. And then the last sentence, So she let him go back to sleep I just imagined her face all dejected and shit, and that's when I started laughing. Like a dog you scolded something for, and the look on their face that's just like "Oh...well okay, I'll just...go away now."

    OMG WTF, WHY IS SHE GONE?! NO SERIOUSLY WHY THE FUCK, WHY DUDE. NO FUCK, AH!

    THAT'S CUTE THAT HE GOT DEVIN'S HELP TOO! IT'S LIKE THEY DONT LIKE EACH OTHER, BUT THEY STILL WANNA WORK TOGETHER TO FIND TIFFERZZZZ.

    AWWWW, BRIAN DECIDED TO COME <333 TOTALLY EPIC CLICHE MOVIE MOMENT, JUST SAYIN' BUT I FUCKING LOVE IT. AHAHAHA.

    Hours. They drove around for hours. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, THAT WAS THE LINE! AHAHAHAHA. NOW I FOUND OUT WHAT BWAHAHAHAHA.

    OMG, TIFFANY IS SUCH A CRAZY BITCH! OMG DAMN

    She arms crossed over her chest as she glared at the wall in front of her.
    After taking a deep breath, Zack began, “I met a girl just recently…”

    “She…God, I can’t even begin to describe her. She made me hate her so much, but I kept her around anyway. The whole time she was with me, I made both myself and that girl believe that I was too good for her. I was terrible to her…


    TALKING ABOUT HERSELF EHHH, EHHH -NUDGE, NUDGE-

    NO FUCK NO!

    Then he heard nothing.

    She was gone.
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
    September 28th, 2009 at 03:31am
  • brighteyes.

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    WHY?
    SONOFABITCH I KNEW YOUR PESSIMISTIC ASS WOULD DO THIS BUT STILL! I just....I had this gut feeling that they wouldn't end up together but there was still that hope, just that little bit of hope that they would end up together. I mean, who else would be able to take their psychotic personalities for so long? If they can put up with each other like that, it's just....THEM NOT BEING TOGETHER IS WRONG! You don't go through all of that with a person and end up weaker than before you started. This is just ridiculous. My fragile soul feels like it's about to shatter. I've waited so long for this and I knew it wasn't going to end happy but....SHE'S JUST GONE? JUST LIKE THAT? AND WHAT ABOUT BRIAN? JUST DESTROY HIM WHY DON'T YOU! UGHHHH....I DON'T WANT TO BITCH THIS WHOLE COMMENT SO IT'S ENDING NOW AND I'LL TALK TO YOU ON AIM AFTER I RECOVER FROM THIS JGFDKLJFKL:ASHJFKL:JASFS!
    September 28th, 2009 at 03:21am
  • LaurieeLionFace.

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    well damn. i thought she was like an ex girlfriend who cheated. XDD
    you're amazing:]<3
    September 8th, 2009 at 11:10pm
  • LipstickLullaby!

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    Wow. I had a feeling they were related but I didn't know that was his sister!
    More when you can.
    <3
    September 8th, 2009 at 05:26am
  • Music.Sex.Love

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    Okay.
    I just went back and read over EVERYTHING. Every last sentence, every last word. And this is by far one of the reasons I love you so much. This is an amazing story and I can tell you've put your entire heart into this. This is your baby. I don't even know where to begin. You portrayed an awesome brother/sister relationship between Zacky and I. Brian's being the perfect asshole, and Zacky, well, no one can portray his personality nearly as well as you can. Or what his personality would be like, so to say. He' crazy but loving. It's the perfect mix. I really can't wait to find out more and you know that I will bug you every day from now on to update. Jimmy and I are so cute!! And I want to know more about the relationship between Jimmy and Tiffany. Hopefully it's nothing that will jeaopridize Jimmy/Jocelyn. And I'm glad that Devin is out of the picture.. hopefully?
    Pinkly was in this chapter and it compeltely made me smile! And Icky was in the story too! Now you just need Mr. Bungle and Bella.
    This is a breathtakingly captivating story and you need to update now!
    I love you, you deserve more credit than you get!
    This will forever be in my subscriptions, even once it's over.
    So please, don't ever stop writing like this, and keep up the AMAZING work.
    I love you.
    <3 Jocelyn
    August 26th, 2009 at 10:05pm
  • james owen sullivan.

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    I just coins this story and...
    Oh my god I nearly crapped my pants at how good it is!!!!!!
    Update soon!
    Plllleeeeaaaasssseeee!
    Has to be one of THEE best zacky v stories I've read so far.
    Update soon!!!!
    August 26th, 2009 at 10:36am
  • evencrayonslaughatme

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    omg!!!!
    so the whole time I thought she was like Brian's ex...
    totally didn't expect her to be his sister.
    hella awesome update!!!!!!!!
    August 25th, 2009 at 07:04pm
  • efflorescxnt

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    im confused...very confused...umm more? oh god now i dont even know how to ask for another chapter...
    August 25th, 2009 at 08:54am