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  • jinx_the_scourge

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    You know, I read the update and, for some reason, I was completely convinced I left a comment. But the more I thought about it, the less I remembered actually doing it. So I came back to check and sure enough, I did not. So I am very sorry lol. I pestered you to update and then I don't leave a comment. You can punch me in the arm lol.

    I can't blame Zacky for feeling the way he does. Everyone else knows what's going on and no one will tell him. He's developing feelings for a woman he had no intentions of developing them for (?). They really need to explain to him why she keeps freaking out all the time. It might make him a little more sympathetic.
    May 12th, 2009 at 03:31am
  • finallymoving.

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    I really like this story =]
    May 11th, 2009 at 06:39am
  • A7Xmcs

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    I don't blame Zacky for being frustrated--Jimmy and Brian both know what's happened...and so does she. Just tell the man and perhaps it won't be so bad...
    May 6th, 2009 at 07:28pm
  • screamedlullaby

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    i like this :)
    May 3rd, 2009 at 04:35am
  • Just.Listen

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    I just started reading this, but I like it so far :)
    May 2nd, 2009 at 01:35am
  • The Dodger

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    Zacky is such a dick sometimes. :roll:
    But then Tiff is a nutcase. ...I don't know what to think of her anymore. I'm curious as to what the hell Brian did to her though. More soon!
    May 1st, 2009 at 10:04pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Hmm... okay, so first of all, I feel I must say that I'm still enjoying the story and your writing style, but honestly, your main character is pissing me off... haha.

    She seems very manipulative. It's like she's constantly trying to play the victim and, granted, I dont know the back story as you've yet to let that out, but she sure as hell doesn't seem as innocent as she likes to act.

    I think Jimmy and Jocelyn's reaction was a bit harsh... again, it's all about "poor Tiffany", like she can do no wrong. It just seems one sided... they don't have a lot of faith in someone who's been their friend for a long time, yet they have complete faith in someone who hasn't been around years. I get that he probably spoke to her a bit harshly, but I can't really seem to blame him. She's not really giving him any reason to be any nicer to her, in my opinion.

    Anyways.. sorry for the ramble. As I said to begin with, this isn't saying I don't like your story or your characters, they're just frustrating me right now is all. But hey, that's a sign of a good writer if you can invoke any sort of emotions within a reader =)
    May 1st, 2009 at 09:45am
  • bloodravyn

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    love!
    May 1st, 2009 at 07:25am
  • CharmedAngel88

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    Great update! It was well worth the wait!

    I can't wait for the next update!
    May 1st, 2009 at 07:07am
  • PokerFace

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    god this story just sucks you in!

    more please! :)
    May 1st, 2009 at 06:59am
  • LipstickLullaby!

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    Wow.Love your story can't wait for more!!
    Haha as soon as i started reading this Girl I Know started playing lol
    Subscribing!
    <3
    May 1st, 2009 at 06:58am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    awesome chapter, I loved it
    cant wait for the next one...curious to find out more of what she meant at the end!
    May 1st, 2009 at 06:28am
  • Court_

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    So I just finally read the latest chapter and I loved it! I thought my character's little cameo in the beginning was really funny, especially with all the chaos that happened right before Zacky brought Tiff. into his home. And what the hell is up with Tiffany?! She just completely broke down out of practically nowhere over seeing Brian again, and then allowed herself to become fully vulnerable to Zacky after the both of them tried so hard to keep their guard up. And poor Zacky! He's just having so many conflicting feelings that I feel bad for the guy, though he may be a bit insensitive at times. But anyway, I'm just really excited to see how exactly Tiffany and Brian knew each other and what the true nature of their relationship was, and how this affects her realtionship with Zacky and Zacky's relationship with the guys. I can't wait for the next update! <3

    PS. Thanks for calling me awesome in your chapter vid. That was so sweet of you! <333
    April 19th, 2009 at 11:39am
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Well, this is quite the interesting story I've begun reading here...

    I like your idea and the way you write, it's all pretty darn good =) All your characters are written so well that I feel as though I actually know these people.. which is kind of weird to experiance. haha.

    Although I have to admit I was little confused about Brian and the other guys being so pushy about wanting to know what Zacky was up to and the way Brian stormed over to the hotel.. I kind of thought "Um, what the hell business it of yours? None. Back off." But then when I realised why you had them act like that, for the plotlines purpose, it all made sense. haha.

    Anyways, I plan to subscribe and I look forward to seeing where you take it and what the hell is going on with this girl and Brian. Well, what was going, I should say. =)
    April 17th, 2009 at 06:12pm
  • bloodravyn

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    ooohs, i need more!
    April 16th, 2009 at 11:51am
  • fuzz!

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    Brian! Why is Brian beating him up? He's so pissed off! And obviously Brian doesn't know her because she's a prostitute since he called her a slut and claimed that he's never fucked her.

    Haha oh man I completely forgot that she fainted so I was like "wtf why is Z dressing her" and stuff. But I realized it once he carried her unconcious body out of the room.

    Z's quite the hypocrite! He's always so lovey dovey with T now and cares about her so much but he still makes himself believe that he's so much better than her.

    KLEPTO?!?!? Hmmm... I'm so curious as to how B know her now. I really want to know!!!!!

    "Maybe you're just dumb" haha God I feel so bad but I really had to laugh when I read that. I do think that T's probably smarter than Z thinks though.

    Finally Z owns up to his childish ways! He laughed at himself when he realized that he was acting like he was 5. I've been waiting for him to do that...

    Now why does she need to see Jimbo??? And he's crying now that he sees her. This is so fricken weird! BFFs! They are BFFs! Haha and it gets a little weirder.

    So I loooooooooooooooooooooooved the chapter soooo much. =) =) =) It was fabulous and I enjoyed it. The length was great, and I hope you like my long comment. Haha Can't wait to find out what happened with Brian and Tiffany!
    April 15th, 2009 at 12:03am
  • The Dodger

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    Wow you seriously had me shouting 'Oh my God' at my computer screen!
    (that's a good thing though) I loved that chapter! I want to know how she knows Jimmy and the guys! More whenever you can. :D
    April 14th, 2009 at 10:58pm
  • SuckMyGLAM

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    i luvs it it's such a beautiful story!!!!!!!!!! I am officially addicted. Update pweez
    April 14th, 2009 at 08:37pm
  • jinx_the_scourge

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    I just started reading this and I absolutely adore it. It's very unique and amazingly written. I loved when he rammed the back of that guy's car. That was too great lol. And the last update was fantastic. The part about not being able to be there for her while they were both breaking down really made me think.

    MORE SOON!!!
    April 14th, 2009 at 08:16pm
  • A7Xmcs

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    So I just found this and I'm hooked. Great job!
    April 14th, 2009 at 08:04pm