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That was an awesome update. I still wanna know what the hell happened with Brian though. It's really bugging me. Haha.

Loved the update and I can't wait for more!

awesome update, loved it
Zacky is so confusing....I cant wait for more!

"Dude, you locked yourself in your house for months." Haha! Sorry but I found this amuzing since Z was all trying to deny that the break up hit him hard.

What a little kid! Z's all like "I bet Tee doesn't think I laugh like a girl" what's that all about? That's something you say against someone when you're like 10! Hehe and Jocelyn heard him! What's she gonna do?

Oh man the boys are so mean. Johnny thinks she's fat and ugly, Jimmy thinks she's a he, and Brian's the serious one, as usual. I was hoping they were going to follow him.

The hawk has left the nest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Haha I love Jim.

Don't do it Brian, don't do it! It'll only end badly. OMG! They know eachother?!?!? How do they know eachother?!??! Raaaaaa! I need to know now!

Haha so this a weird comment. Sorry it took forever for me to read. Can't wait for the next update cause this one was fabulous!

awesome update
I cant wait to see how they know each other!

So I just stumbled upon this story b/c you're apparently friends w/ my friend Angel on here and I must say that I love it! It's different from any other story that I've read on here and let me tell you, I've read ALOT of stories here haha. It's obviously not different in the girl meets boy, girl and boy fall in love kinda way, but the fact that she's 1. A hooker, and 2. Zack has this whole childish, jealous thing going on. In other stories he tends to be either a complete teddy bear or a big asshole, so seeing an almost...immature?...side to him is fun! Well, that being said, I've pretty much fallen in love with this story and I can't wait to see what happens next and to find out how Brian and Tiffany know each other.

And as to the whole contradiction thing...was it when in chapter 3 Zee said that he wouldn't count her as a friend and would be "embarassed to be seen in public with her" and then in chapter four he turns around and takes her to a very public bar for their little "therapy session"? I think that's it...but I may be wrong so I guess we'll see haha
Update soon! I can't wait. <33

oh shit!!!!

can't wait to find out how they know each other!!

i bet i knoww!

That was EPIC!

Hahahaha. Oh, that ending. Yes, you did lie to me. But you know what? I kinda had a feeling you were because how could you not have Brian cause at least a little bit of trouble?

I loved the update and I can't wait for more!

I love this story <3
I love Zacky's hotheadedness, and his jealousy.
I love Tiffany's stubbornness.
And the video update was adorable C:

She punched him! :tehe:
I don't know how I feel about that exactly. I mean, he did kind of have it coming for just going and picking her up...
Ooooh but he's jealous!
Loved the update, more whenever you can!

Oh man it made me laugh when Zack rolled up the window on that random prostitute. It would've been so cool if her finger got smooshed. Wait, it would've been mean and not cool. No, it would've been cool.

Zacky's a little possessive over someone that he doesn't think is good enough for him. I'd be pissed if I was Tiffany too. I'd probably kick his ass!

And she did kick his ass! Awesome.

Uh-oh what's Z gonna tell them? He'll probably lie and then they won't believe him and then he'll have to tell the truth. Maybe. Or maybe he'll come up with a good lie that they will believe!

I loved the update and I can't wait to find out what happens!

Aw you're so cute! I loved your little video. Haha.

I loved the update! And you didn't disappoint when you said that stuff was going to go down! And I did like my little shout out! Thanks! *Hugs*

I can't wait to read more!

loved that update!
cant wait to see how Zacky's gonna explain himself!

hey great story so far.
i love the idea, its diffrent from all the other zacky stories! n:)
keep updating :)
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This is amazing!!!
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love!

ILOVETHEENDING.
it was pretty cool.
anyways, i kinda dont like how stubborn tiffany was, but hey.
i'd be the same way. :b
love ya, z-unit. <3

*subscribes*

ZACKY YOU ASS! How dare you do that to a girl! Even if she is a postitute!
Morally and mentally she is far above him. He seems unstable and confused. At least she has her act together.
And yay! my birthday!!!!
Don't be hating just becuase peeps love me Zacky! You'll have your birthday eventually.

This is really a great story!!! I love it and I can't wait for more darlin'!

<3 Jocelyn