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  • fuzz!

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    And now it comes out! He and his girl broke up. Which is why he was getting a prostitute...

    "As horrible as it sounded, she was below him, and he would be embarrassed to be seen in public with her." So I wrote a sentence calling Zack some mean names but I decided to delete it because he still seems like a good guy all in all. But that is so lame that he thinks that. I would punch him if I saw him because no one is below him. I believe that he has good intentions with Tiffany though, considering that's he's not all about the sex, so I won't do that.

    And I'm starting to think that Z might be just trying to get some sympathy since his girl broke up with him and Bri gets more attention than him.

    I really like how Z and T get along and seem like they're great friends but then something happens that makes you realize that "oh yeah they're not friends at all." Like the fact that she wants to get away from him for a while towards the end of the chapter. It makes the story interesting.

    Zacky mcZackface is a lame-o. That's all I can say. She's not "worthy" of him? He doesn't even know her! Psh.

    Well I l-l-l-loved the update! It was amazing. Thank you for sharing it with me. =)
    April 8th, 2009 at 03:20am
  • The Dodger

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    He wants someone worthy?

    Hmph. I think someone needs to get off his high horse before he gets a kick where the sun don't shine.
    I'd be happy to take care of that. :con:
    :XD I and I loved when the two of them went, "Can we not listen to this?"
    They're so cute together and they don't even know it. -sigh-
    Great update. :D
    April 8th, 2009 at 03:19am
  • CharmedAngel88

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    Loved the update.
    But it's sad how Z doesn't see her as "worthy". That's just sad. And it kinda makes me mad at him too.
    I can't wait for more!
    April 8th, 2009 at 03:04am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    awesome update
    I got a little mad that Zacky doesnt think she's worthy...
    love it though and I cant wait for more!
    April 8th, 2009 at 03:02am
  • KatieVIIX

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    so i totally think that zacky is a little too extreme with not wanting to be seen with her in public, but i totally love how he doesn't want sex every time he sees her. (:
    April 8th, 2009 at 02:52am
  • The Dodger

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    I absolutely loved that.
    Zacky was so adorable! In Love
    April 8th, 2009 at 12:53am
  • fuzz!

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    Haha! Zacky's such a cutie. He was all embarassed to tell her what turned him on when she's a prostitute!

    Alright well I loved the chapter and the story is great so far. I can't wait for moreeeee! I hope that Zack does go visit her some more which is totally weird considering her profession, but she was really nice to him and she likes him too! Now that I know why Zack's all upset and stuff, I want to know why Tiffany's a prostitute!
    April 7th, 2009 at 03:45pm
  • CharmedAngel88

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    So I finally got around to reading this one.
    I must say that I really like it! No wonder you're in love with this story!
    I'm looking forward to reading more, because you know that Bri's going to ruin things somehow. Haha.
    April 7th, 2009 at 08:12am
  • x.Kris.x

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    Wow, I love it and it's only two chapters in! This is different. It's interesting how Tiffany is the excluded one, yet when Zacky pulled up, the others gave way for her to approach the car. I wonder how hard she had to work for that sort of respect, especially since the others don't appear to like her.
    I can totally see Zacky being nervous about picking up a hooker. He may be open about sex, but paying for it is something totally different. I love how the narration is in third person too, because Zacky's thoughts and words seem that much more authentic. I'm dying to see how Syn's gonna ruin the lovely working relationship that's been established...=]
    April 7th, 2009 at 08:05am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    love this so far!!
    April 7th, 2009 at 07:48am
  • fuzz!

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    This is intriguing. I really like it so far. I like how Tiffany is kind of the outcast prostitute and the others are all gossiping about her but she doesn't give a crap. I'm curious as to why Zacky is picking her up because it's obvious that he doesn't usually pick up prostitutes. Now I want to know what's going to happen! Are they going to end up having sex or what? I hope you update soon. =)
    April 7th, 2009 at 12:21am
  • babymoose

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    updateeee, pleaseeeeee.
    ^see, i'm whining, that's no good. update and stop my whining.
    March 31st, 2009 at 06:00am
  • KatieVIIX

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    (:
    I can tell this is going to be a keeper.
    more soon right, cause you love writing this... (:
    March 18th, 2009 at 01:28am
  • tiptoes

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    I like the idea, it's different.
    Really nice. (:
    Can't wait for more.
    March 18th, 2009 at 01:00am
  • The Dodger

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    Ooooh! I really like this so far!
    More soon?
    March 18th, 2009 at 12:20am