Sick Boy - Comments

Love it.

GEORGE!
lawl

I must say this every comment, but I really enjoy reading your writing, cause it's so individual and different to everything else (Cause those two things do NOT mean the exact same thing AT ALL)

Anywho, now I've made myself look stupid[er than normal] I shall leave.

Good morrow!

Did I catch a Green Day reference in there?

I just love this story. I love the whole concept and everything about it. You write it in a way that just works so well. I don't know how to describe it exactly, but it just works so well. It's amazing.

The name George is SO much worse than Arthur. :P

Their banter, their coversations... well, it just seems so real, you know? Once again, I am blown away by the style, that get-in-your-head-that-only-Fish-can-do way of writing. Gah. Just wanted to say it.

From memory, I like the going to somewhere really nice part, and then they'll be let in because they're THEM (haha!), and how they're okay now. So sweet and simple. Pwns the socks off people. ::lmfao

Fave line: You have the worst puns in the world. It kinda made sense, in a Rayn sort of way. Woot!

i absoloutly love this story, it's amazing the way you can express what Gee and Ry are feeling, and also i love the way you write their thoughts. I think this story is really fresh and original i've loved all of it so far, and I can't but hope it'll keep on getting better

I laughed out loud at the last part.
That's so typical of a relationship. Like, when Andie acts a bit spacey I call her by her last name and she gets so annoyed.

They paused as they waited for the elevator—each in their own worlds. Don’t disturb each other boys. You just might find out something you don’t want to hear about. This whole idea of perfection might get ruined. So be quiet.

I really liked that part. This story has a perfect way of wording both Gerard and Ryan's thoughts as well as an outside opinion, the way the viewer on a television set might think . . . if they were a bit pessimistic.

I clapped when I got the subscription e-mail to this in my inbox.

^_^

<333

:(

They're sorta sad now.
But freakishly realistic.

That was the reaction nobody wants, but everyone gets. Get it? Haha. It's such a downer how Gee forgave Ry but not really... I mean, waffles for sex? (Though I like the idea of him making waffles)

But Ry really must stop drinking. Would Gee let him know how bad alcoholism is, or let him experience it himself? I never thought you'd come up with a plot like this after S&S. Not at all. And it's fantastic.

I'm sorta... blank right now. Sorry for the sucky review.

Btw, loved this line: This was a nice Ryan to have. He was the perfect version—the impeccably stunning, wonderful version of Ryan. The sober version.

Expressed the whole idea of the chapter. You do the summarizing and concept-tie-in-with-story thing so effing well!

You write this so well.

Oh gosh I love this story so much.
It's honest, blunt, true, human.
Of course Gerard's not going to totally forgive Ryan right away.
And of course Ryan wants him to.
I really liked the line "before Gerard--before Pete Wentz".
Mainly because I like reading detached sentences about Pete Wentz in Panic! fics.
I dunno why.

I had too many favorite lines, so I'm just going to post the first one I copied.

He was a toilet bowl groupie, intent on familiarizing himself with the porcelain bowl.

It was an extremely interesting way to look at things.

:D

I love this story.
-and swoon-

I like the strange parent-child relationship that Gerard and Ryan have; it makes even small chapters like this more indepth. Just shows that if you have a good plot, and a good excecuation, you don't need all the pretty metaphors, simlies and adjectives to make the story good. PLus, the writing style is just so interesting. It's like you get really really in side their thoughts, but it comes out so naturally and easily for you. I couldn't fucking write the way you do >_< It's amazIng.

I'm loving the sequel so far Fish
But I agree, Ry getting drunk and leaving Gerard like that is quite saddening, make it better?
-Subscribes-

awsome story
love it

keyboard + broken = sucky review ahead.

ryan + mychem shirt + bp joke = cute beyond reason.

lovesick + sain paragraph = like snippets of s&s, recollection of memories. makes me nostalgic.

ryan's mom + meanness to gee = grr. hate her already.

gee being maternal + ryan being drunk and leaving him alone = so, so sad. im sad now. :sigh: :( hope it gets better.

i know ill love this story as much as its prequel. now ill go read your new fics (druscilla recced them. you really must pm me if you have new ones, wifey).

ily. sorry again for the stupid review.

be well. btw, can i call you marlee?

i just wondered. will the sequel to this be sain man/guy? xD sorry again. im trying to cheer myself up. harhar.

" “Where’re you going?” Gerard called when Ryan did not immediately return to the couch. His spot was getting cold. Ryan had fit perfectly against Gerard so that he wasn’t freezing. And now he was getting colder. And colder and colder. "

i love the way you described that. i got the impression that you meant if ryan and gerard ever split then gerard would get colder hearted and more withdrawn and such.

cant wait for another update!

Aww poor Gerard! I'll come over and keep him company >_> *huggles Gerard*

Poor Gerard :cry: I hope they don't separate!

Awhh... I feel so sad for Gerard. I'm looking forward to seeing this story progress.

:( I just want to give Gerard a hug, the end of the chapter made me feel sad.

Ryan, you should have stayed with Gerard dammit! Grrr...but instead he wants to get drunk.

I hate Ryans mom...but then again, who would/could like her? She's horrible.

Oh, lovelovelove this story.
I love how it's coming to life so quickly and fluidly.
I love how Ryan's young and Gerard's ... maternal-esque.
I love how their personalities and experiences are making this so different from the normal way it would go.
I love you writing.
I hate Ryan's mom.

My favorite part was when you were talking about love.

Oddly enough, as I think of it, I'm drinking Bacardi while I read this.

-giggles-

“You were drunk, Ry. You’re shit when you’re drunk,” Gerard muttered, turning to the stove. God. This made him feel like a housewife or something. What was he? The new Adrienne Armstrong? Oh god no. Shut up Gerard! You’re just jealous ‘cause right now, Ryan gets to run around the world and complain about how something he wrote is overplayed and you’re shut up in a recording studio, bickering with Ray about what the melody should be. You’re just bitter.

“Are you cooking?” Ryan asked.

“Yeah. Shut up.”

Ryan raised his eyebrows momentarily, then let it go. Since when did Gerard cook? Things didn’t make sense this morning. Ah, but things never made sense the morning after you achieved total and complete insanity the night before. You’re insane Ryan. You don’t even get the privilege of being insain. That’s Gerard’s thing, sorry baby. You’re just…sick. Fuck. And you don’t even get to misspell shit. Sic? Sik? Ha. That looks so bad, Ry, and you know it.

This made me laugh aloud. I was imagining it in my head.

Ah, the real world catches up on RyRy and Gee. I'm too... 'eh?'-ish to give a decent review, but you already know I loved it.

We shall be waiting.;)

I'm very excited for this.