The Ripper - Comments

Fantastic and unusual.
I loved the twist at the end, I believed Lindsey at work.
Your writing is to be applauded, I love your style.

Creepy.

An interesting alternate universe written by your hand to look into! Gripping plotline, if somewhat short (and sweet!), and I like the abruptness of the ending; it leaves everything open.

Wonderful, as usual.

jack's tale is one of my favorites! i adored this! i loved your description in everything, it flowed rather nicely.i feel like a plebe writing in this thing.

Interesting how you mixed Gerard and Lyn-Z with the cases of Jack the Ripper. The storyline was yet again truly amazing. There fore I applaud your work. Keep it up my friend

This was truly amazing, I absolutely adore it. The description was lovely and well depicted, I love the fact how he sensed something entirely different in her and called off the thing he was most passionate about destroying simply because she was different.

I like how the story was twisted, leading one to believe that she might roam free and change her ways and Gerard would not have to silence her as he did others. However I felt the hint of foreshadowing when he did not smile back, it’s as if he sensed that she was lying.

Gerard has no mercy for those who become the disgrace he despises and she was warned, she could have been lucky but she turned down the offer of life.

This is great