okay I love u, ur stories, and I absolutely LOVE Jade! (how can u not? She's hilarious) but anyways...I am majorly pissed at Edwin, WHY IS HE ALWAYS NICE WHEN SHE LEAVES!?! I like Jasper better...I sorry but yeah lol, I'm going to read ur sequel! I hope Edwin cleans up his act :D coz Jade loves that boy to pieces and Baby Avery and Manny needs a good daddy! :)
Now that is how you suck up to somebody! Okay, I will be posting "Baby, I think I love you" very very soon. I haven't got much typed out, but I'm working hard, I can assure you. Oh, and that title is a work in progress, so just stop by my profile to see if I put up any new story. Thank you for so many comments =]
omg you have to put a sequel!!!! this story is the best!!! please please please!!! or let those pink elephants haunt you for the rest of your life!!!! XD
Hello! I think you should write another part to it, but keep Jade with Jasper. Maybe find someone else for Edwin. :) Hope I helped. Ohh maybe you could put a duck stalker in the story!! oh that would be funny! :P :) ~Sweetsunbeam1
You realllllly need to make a sequal, I cried when I was reading it. I think Edwin and Jade should be together when he is being his real self, he is so perfect for her and Jasper may be TOOOOOO perfect....Maybe he is a Stepford Husband o.o
i want her and edwin to get back together because jasper's lieing to her to get her!! plus i think edwin finally gets it!! you cant fource people to do any thing because it will turn around and bit you in the ass!! wo write another sequl already!!!!
needs the sequal i think u should like fast foward to wen Avery is like kind of grown up and how Jasper and Jade are happy I dont know just an idea but i do hope you do a sequal because for me it just dosent seem right to end it like that..... it needs more to it... i dont but i do hope u add a sequal =)
yes edwin is such a 'great' man sarcasm is there for the people that are stuiped! he just likes killing people! keep updating. i hope edwin is much nicer to her or that she goes with jasper because dude nobody should go though what he has put her thourgh!