March 27th, 2009 at 12:59am
Okay, so I have never really given a wonderful comment before, and I think I should start trying, because I may not be a wonderful writer, but I still get comments, and I know how happy that makes me. :]
So, here I go. ;D
I really just have to mention this, because it kind of made me laugh at the beginning, but the title is wonderful! It is said, but sometimes I enjoy titles more than the stories, (but let's keep that between you and me). Also, I tend to spend more time picking titles than writing...xD
Next, I just LOVED the whole first paragraph, I guess because I relate in a way, you could ask any of my friends and I have been known to talk about wanting an extravagant death, so again, it kind of made me laugh because I could just imagine Gerard ranting to Frank about how he wanted to go out.
I guess I want to talk about your writing style next. AH-MAY-ZING (i know that isn't spelled right. xD) I really loved the way that you tied the words together, and made the one-shot, and it really didn't seem rushed at all. ;] I know when I was writing I worried a lot about different things, but never mind that.
All in all, I really loved it, and am really happy to see that you are joining the contest, I guess now I am just happy I entered...since I tend to just try but never really get motivated to do things like this.
So, great luck in the contest, and continue writing your beautiful words.
I really love and appreciate your writing style, and this is inspirational
Very original, very unique!
X0x0C
p.s. this was written sooo beautiful. Really this is amazing marie.