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  • HopefulRissa

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    Sigh. That's much better. Tom and Madi being awkward and adorable. Love it.
    June 5th, 2009 at 06:11am
  • munch

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    Amazing updates =) I hope Oliver beats the shit out of him XD
    http://member.mibba.com/69256/stories/ She has a few Lee stories. I myself need to write a descent story about him, but no one seems to like him very much so I brush that thought to the side of my mind lmao
    June 5th, 2009 at 06:07am
  • FTS.brittni.

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    I hope Oliver beats the crap out of Jack too. I think it's cute how protective Oli is over her, in a big brother sort of way. And I'm so glad Tom and her worked everything out. He's so adorable :]
    June 5th, 2009 at 06:06am
  • bitterxperfume

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    I hope oliver beats the shit out of him
    June 5th, 2009 at 06:03am
  • orlando weeks.

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    fucking great, as expected.
    June 5th, 2009 at 06:02am
  • erratic

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    Phew. I'm glad Madison got out of there when she did.
    5 more chapters left? Holy crud!

    I have no idea how this is going to end, but I can't wait to read it.
    :D
    June 5th, 2009 at 03:30am
  • Ri_gLiTz

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    oh wow, five more chapters. AHHH! :) Can't wait for them :crazy:
    June 5th, 2009 at 01:50am
  • orlando weeks.

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    HOLYSHITYES!
    ;]

    go her and her power.
    June 4th, 2009 at 11:58pm
  • Whoaishly Lame

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    Yeah! Way to fight back against Mr. Creepers!
    Jack was giving off this super uncomfortable vibe from the beginning, and I'm really surprised she actually went with him from the party. I only go home with friends or girls I know pretty well. Works for me.
    Oh, and in this chapter (#24) you called him Luke instead of Jack.
    June 4th, 2009 at 11:52pm
  • Dolls A Train Wreck

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    Guess I am physic
    I loved it
    Scared me for second there
    June 4th, 2009 at 11:12pm
  • RETROMANTiC

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    so much for jack the ripper.
    we've got a jack the rapist on our hands..
    i love the story (: i can't believe it's gonna be over soon, though..
    June 4th, 2009 at 09:11pm
  • formerlyknownas

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    So I have to were this off my phone, so it's going to be a tad short. But omfg Jack is the biggest cr33p everrrr. Gross. AND ONLY FIVE CHAPTERS LEFT?
    I'm anxious. I'm dying.
    June 4th, 2009 at 06:47pm
  • boycott love

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    NOOO! I dont want it to end. Sad
    Great update. :cute:
    June 4th, 2009 at 06:22pm
  • bitterxperfume

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    well damn I did't expect that but it was good
    June 4th, 2009 at 06:14pm
  • HopefulRissa

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    Oh shit. I kind of had a feeling Jack was that kind of bad news.
    Since you have five already written, that means an update real soon right? : )
    June 4th, 2009 at 05:23pm
  • pineapplexpieces

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    Jack's an ass.
    please update soon? :)
    June 4th, 2009 at 03:46pm
  • Lady_Plague_6661

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    only five more?!?!?! D:
    thats going to be a sad moment for all!

    and i knew that i wouldnt like Jack. fucken bastard.
    and how could she think Tom would dump her for Mercy of all people!!!!

    gah! i hope things are fixed quickly!
    June 4th, 2009 at 03:10pm
  • xAbiiCakes

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    as in jack barakat? ;D
    haha im loving this story muchies (:

    x
    June 4th, 2009 at 01:25pm
  • DontGet_It_InMyEye

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    I was expecting that, but whatever =D

    thanks for the update,Lovely
    June 4th, 2009 at 12:37pm
  • bessie162

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    omgosh... that was so scary! i thought he was gonna get away with it!! my heart is actually beating really fast write now!! haha., please update asap! its my birthday!! ahahah. thankyou. xxxx
    June 4th, 2009 at 11:28am
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