Such a Beautiful Color - Comments

  • Rian Dawson

    Rian Dawson (100)

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    I liked this as well.

    The humor in it struck me as a little inappropriate. Generally, when writing something like this, I try to go for irony. It balances out the one shot, and gives it that humor, without the reader realizing it.

    Good job.
    April 26th, 2009 at 12:04am