Dressing Cobwebs - Comments

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Wow, that was just... wow.
like the retard i am, i don't know what to say.
This was just... weird.
weirdly intriguing.
XD
i never could understand the love some people have for creepy-crawlies, needless to say spiders.
but i love the way you described them, and there's a sort of beauty about them that you managed to bring out...
which is really good,
making someone who has no particular like or dislike for them understand what makes them beautiful.
:D
Good job hun.

That was so intriguing and unexpected, and original. But I don't like spiders so that part creeped me out, and how he was naked O_O

But aside from that, it was written really well, and I can't argue that they're hard workers.

This is an incredible story, it really is.

You’ll never know my name and I will never know yours.
That makes everything so mysterious, I don't think you have any idea how much that blew me away. Everyone is always so focused on introducing themselves and talking about themselves that they never do this. This is truly unique because she has anobesssion strong love for these spiders. (Not being sarcastic, btw...) It really surprised me, because she didn't really mention anything accept her adoration for the spiders. It's truly wondeful...

I’ve always known my parents, but they never knew who I was.
That kind of got me. I think they probably knew who she was, but they didn't understand her. I'm not saying it was bad word choice or anything, I personally just think 'understand' fits better in the second part of the sentance. I mean... I dunno. It's just me, I'm weird.

They work hard and I try my best to honor them.
That really shows love. I don't know why, but that line really got to me. =3 I mean, people don't seem to try to honor the things they love anymore. A kid who has a love for piano will give it up because some kid says it's uncool. This chick gets called insane and does everything anyways.

I kind of wish people understood where she was coming from. I wish they knew the cobwebs inspired this, but they probably never will. People don't bother to look past the surface, even though this woman is truly a marvelous character.

I'm a bit confused. Are the dresses made of actual cobwebs or what? I am utterly confused at that part, but maybe I'll figure it out along the way, I'm not sure.

And the nude thing frightens me a little, but okay, just as long as she's okay with it, I guess I'm ok with it. It was very unexpected, but I loved it. You really have talent, hun. You don't write like everyone else here! Kudos!!!

yay, im the second to comment! i feel special..

i loved the story, just because it had some sort of meaning to it. although, due to the intense fear i have of these creatures, im scared to sit still, bc now im feel like spiders are going to close in around me and.. yeah *shudders*

so im freaked now. ik she adores spiders, but the part that got me is that she lets them run all over her body.. i cant even have one in sight's distance without having a freakout!

lol okay so this story was different, but i still liked it. i just dnt like the fact that im tense and paranoid now. good luck on the competition btw!

but i did like the pic of the girl. i infered that she was dressed in cobwebs. that was a great idea, idk how u saw it, but that was still great!

Raping your virginity once again :file:

This is basically what I said before, plus something extra about the picture. :tehe:

This is brilliant. It's so original, especially compared to the other Cobweb stories. I really, really like it, although I really don't like spiders and it was rather freaky.
And I totally adore you for making it feel longer than 600 words. When I read it the first time I thought it was over before the runways.

I seriously don't get how someone can be so fascinated by cobwebs and want to wear them because I'm just, I think they're gross, but you really made this girl seem as she thought it was perfectly normal and she thought the people that called her insane, was crazy because they didn't see the beauty she knew was there.

I also love that she never wears normal clothes, but only ever the cobwebs. It's a really great detail and it tells us a lot about just how obsessed she is without using too many words which is important here. :cute:

This is great and my own entry is just fading in comparison. just, wow :cheese:
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The picture was gorgeous, and as I'll assume that it wasn't cobwebs on the picture, I'm just saying that it's really imaginative of you to see it as cobwebs. I mean, because I know it's supposed to look like it I can squint my eyes and tilt my head a little and see it, but I would never have thought of it myself.
I admire you like hell for these brilliant, original ideas.