So I decided to check this out, and I pretty much love it. :) I love how all of her bros are all protective of her. And I love Jordan the most...not to mention I think he's incredibly good looking....hehe :) But I was extremely happy when she told Blake that she was a Chicago Blackhawks fan. :) That's my fave team :) haha I love this story so far and I can't wait till you write more of it and post it ;) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
I just started reading this and as hard as it is to write about a girl in the NHL, you definitely pull it off. Can't wait to find out who her roomie is! :]