helloooo... I am so, so sorry that this took me about a month to read. I was so busy with finals and then I was busy packing and now I'm completely out of the country but ANYWAY. First of all, I liked that you used Oli's point of view, cause you don't do too much of that, but it was a little confusing to read his accent written out. I mean, I know you're trying to make it authentic but it threw me off a little bit. Other than that, it was a really sweet chapter. :D Can't wait to see what happens now that she's awake. :tehe: This line made me laugh, I am not the kind to be nice, I am seen as arrogant and careless and a tease. So straightforward, haha.
How sweet of Oli! :D I was sad it took so long for you to update, but now I'm happy! :D Yay! Update soon again! I want to see the 'fight' or whatever it'll be. ;)
Also, I LOVE Waking Up in Vegas by Katy Perry. I blast it when I drive hehe. I really liked how you based the dream around the music video. And you described it all really well, like this line: "The money, the hotel suites, the glitter, the confetti, the cars, the diamonds, the food, they spin around me, everything’s so perfect." Good job, update soon!
this is the shit. loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!! :) aw, and finally...the heated debate over who gets the bed. the only question that was running through my mind was "how could any girl deny oli?" hahaha AND THEN SHE ENDS UP IN THE BED WHEN SHE WAKES UP?!?! oh man, you've got me hooked juli. neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed mooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrre. :)
hey hey hey!!! first of all, PLEASE do not think I ditched your story! I was sooo busy. School was killing me, but I just finished all my major exams, so now I'm back yay! Anyways, bout the story... it's so cute :D I like how you made them real characters, I mean sometimes I read stories and you know they fall in love right away and everything's perfect and blah blah blah, but here Kacy's like a normal girl and there are problems between them and everything. I mean it makes it more relatable so good job! About the last chapter... hahaha I cannot believe he was watching The Hills. ha!