(1st comment, yayz!) ooo, talk about interesting! I can't believe I haven't forgotten what most went on. But you did good in description where one who just read the latest chapter can still pick up on what's going on. Keep up the good work. My only dislike would be, toward the end I think you switched your characters names. Or wrote something unclarifying and it caused me to switch the focus. It's just after that 'darkling' is incinerated, but everything else is fine.
March 11th, 2010 at 06:37pm