Jamais Vu - Comments

Aw, this story gives me the warm fuzzies! I love how even though Andy's reluctant, Jack sticks with it, and they end up together ad it makes me smile!~ haha =D

I love this story.
and I cried at the end, it was so sad.
I think you should at least do an epilogue.

So I just read this whole story and loved it all :]
I'm not gonna lie, that last chapter there made my eyes slightly moist
I think it was the whole don't look back thing that did it for me
And if your still considering that sequel, my imput is that there definitely should be one :]
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!! You like The Pink Spiders!? NOBODY I know likes them! I was reading Chapter 4 and you mentioned them there and I flipped out! My friend went to Warped Tour 2 years ago without me and I gave her cash just to get me their shirt! XD It's sooo cool to finally find a fan!

I love the story, Sorry I was a late catcher.
But I loved it. I nearly started crying at the end.
It was a really good story, your a really great writer.

Ch 41-Bruised

Mibba wouldn't let me read this for a while. It kept coming up with a picture of Kanye and a Mibba version of his VMA comment.

“Imagine if I could get my actual head into my pants… Dude, I COULD GIVE MYSELF A BLOWJOB!” he exclaimed. Oh dear. I've never heard of a boy that would....do that.

Ha ha I had a friend make a video where he poured Corona beer in his cereal. Although he said that tasted terrible.

I have to say....I love boys that cry. I kinda hate that shitty double standard that boys who cry are weak. lol Now this is making ME cry. :)

I am so sad this is over. Of course it makes me jealous because I want a boy like that! lol

As for a sequel, you could maybe just write an epilogue if you feel like it. Like maybe 5 or 10 years later, just about what happened to everyone. Just an idea.

Ch 40-I Don't Want To Miss A Thing

"Without missing an attack, he scooted behind me and put his legs on either side of mine" He either must be realllly talented at doing that or he plays way to many video games. :)

And I think it's very fitting and perfect to take her to the Golden Nugget.

Woah! Glow in the dark mini golf?? Is there such a thing??? We don't have that out here...at least not that I know of.

Ch 39-Two Weeks In Hawaii

This chapter made me cry too. It's sad because they're going to be apart soon but I guess in a way happy because they are able to express their love for each other.

I don't want the summer to end for them!

Ice cream at 3 in the morning? I wish I could eat ice cream at 3 in the morning and not have to worry about it going straight to my thighs!!

Ch 38-The World Has Its Shine

Ha ha Alex does have kind of a booty. I don't know if you've seen the acoustic versions of "Weightless" and "Damned If I Do Ya (Damned If I Don't) but he has a booty! Though it's a very nice booty. :)

“Jack, are you—” “Yeah,” he quietly said, slightly embarrassed, but still laughing at the situation. Poor Jack. Andy has some nice skills to get him out of that one without the guys discovering and making fun of him.

I love it when boys freak out in relationships.

Ch 37-Starstrukk

"Looking down at my tattoo, I sighed. Although it was a bird on the surface, I couldn’t help but feel like Jack’s name was etched underneath the ink. Underneath my skin." This totally made me cry.

Ha ha her mom says she's one of the best lawyers, yet is emailing her daughter during a meeting. Nice!

I just realized I have used the phrase "I love..." probably way too much but I can't help it! This story is amazing! I'll have to come up with more words to use instead of love. But just know they all mean love!

Ch 36-Birthday Sex

“I wanna fuck a dog in the ass. He wants to fuck a dog in the ass. I wanna—” Holy crap, what song is that? Can you say awkward??

I love how as soon as Andrea said "You’re the hot one" he smiled (I'm sure cockily) said "I know". :)

Geez! They are like rabbits! But this is waaaay better than it was with Alex because they aren't just fuck buddies, they're in love. Awwww...

Ch 35-Take My Hand

I love "Take My Hand". Love love love it.

Once again, I love how relaxed they are around each other and can joke about things like downloading porn.

Yeah for tattoos! I do agree that they hurt a little less the longer you are there. Unless they start to go near your toes or the sides of your feet. My tattoo on my foot didn't hurt too bad, mostly like scratchinga sunburn except for near my toes and sides of my feet. I could feel my toes vibrating when the guy was tattooing!

I love how Andrea calls Jack's mom Mama B. They are so getting married one day.

Ch 34-I Kissed a Girl

What a boy Jack is...first watching his "live show" then Andy and Brooke. I do have to say, I don't know the big deal about 2 girls kissing. It really isn't any different than kissing a boy.

I still have yet to play beer pong. I am the lamest college student/person ever. Although I kinda hate beer so it would have to be ale or hard liqour for me to play. Beer=yuck.

I love how confident Andrea and Jack are in their relationship. They can kiss members of the same sex (within reason of course) and be okay with it.

Ch 33-Fly Me To The Moon

Holy crap that dog is soooo cute!! And those blue eyes? To die for. It would have been adorable if she named it Jack but then incredibly awkward if they ever broke up (which they won't because they are so freaking cute together!) and probably make Andy miss Jack even more than she already does.

Ch 32-Graduation Day

Yeah! Grad day was the most exciting day of high school for me. How was yours? My robes were this super ugly mustard color. They were supposed to be gold....

Constrictive criticism (I guess); I do have to say I'm a little surprised at Andy straightening up and getting nervous when the names started being called. To me, she doesn't seem the type to get nervous about graduating. And pre-gaming at 8 in the morning...hmmmm...

(I hope that wasn't offensive or anything)

Ch 31-Poppin' Champagne

Freaking amazing place!! I wish I had an awesome afterparty like that.

Geez Andy, along with everyone else sure has high alcohol tolerances!! Man..I haven't had alcohol in so long. Yeah for 21st this December and Vegas!!!

Ch 30-I'll Be

Did your prom have dinner included? All my dances are just the dance and cookies and punch but no dinner. It could also be because my school was incredible poor and all the money we had went to having prom on an aircraft carrier.

All my dances played "Get Low" too and everyone always yelled out motherfucker and skeetskeetskeet even though they blocked it out.

I like how Alex is okay with Jack and Andy dating but he seems to have changed so quickly from manwhore to boyfriend.

Man...I miss dances...

Ch 29-I Gotta Feeling:

"You know that weird feeling you get when you wake up from what seemed like a 5-minute nap, but you really slept for a lot longer?" Oh.My.Gee. That was totally me during Transformers at a drive-in movie. I was snuggled up in two chairs, with my pillow and very warm blanket. I don't know if I was just really tired or because cold makes me sleepy but I fell asleep 10 minutes in and woke up as the credits rolled. And not one of my friends woke me up. Oops.

How was your prom? I can't remember if I asked that in Lasting Impressions. I think I might have because I faintly remember recalling my prom in an aircraft carrier with fireworks! So much fun.

There's a Good Reason These Tables Are Numbered:

Andy and her mom sound like Rory and Lorelei from Gilmore Girls. And lasagna? My favorite! I haven't had it in so long.

I have been waiting for prom for sooo long!!

Okay so I see you can't review each chapter individually so I guess I'll just leave all my comments here with the chapter title. The comment before was for Knock You Down.

Here (In Your Arms):

"But like the saying goes, if you assume it makes an ‘ass’ out of ‘u’ and ‘me.’ " That is freaking amazing. I didn't get it the first time I read it and had to read it a couple of times but LMFAO. You always come up with the best phrases and sentences.

How freaking adorable. I so need a boy who is off key too 'cause then I feel like less of a loser for having a terrible singing voice. :)

Are you still doing questions? On Decisions, Decisions maybe?