I Was Raised Knowing I Had To Marry You, But Who Exactly Are You? - Comments

  • BlueEyedAngel2

    BlueEyedAngel2 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    Sorry it's been so long my computer fried.. I'll try to post son of anyone is still untested in this story
    June 21st, 2012 at 04:20am
  • cara_beara

    cara_beara (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    23
    Location:
    United States
    this story is soooo cool but chapter 3 kind of creeped me out with the parents watching. i understand though and you should wright more. pleeeaaaaassssseeee write more when you have the time.
    June 27th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • BlueEyedAngel2

    BlueEyedAngel2 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    I'm sorry I'm taking forever to post, but I've gotten married and pregnate since starting this story, I also don't have much access to internet right now. I'm working to remedy that but we'll see. Thank you SOOOO much for reading!
    June 7th, 2010 at 06:46pm
  • cjoly02

    cjoly02 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    good story hope u update soon
    May 14th, 2010 at 07:32pm
  • talking_girl95

    talking_girl95 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    26
    Location:
    United States
    this is good except it's a little creep that their parents watch them have sex
    March 23rd, 2010 at 12:47am
  • Maddie.

    Maddie. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    25
    Location:
    United States
    This is incredibly good! I love your twist on the typical arranged marriages, it's really spectacular.
    It's a really great plot, and I love every aspect of this. With them being thirteen it's a little weird for me to comprehend, but I'm getting used to it- I guess I have to adjust, in a way. I like the way you have a background story for everything, it's much, much better that way. Some people just make these obscure twists in their stories, and it makes no sense at all, and is altogether unprofessional. With you, that is not the case. I'm subscribing, so I hope you update soon.
    March 21st, 2010 at 08:30am
  • BlueEyedAngel2

    BlueEyedAngel2 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    I'm sorry it's taking me forever to write more, I dropped out of college and got a job, a finacee, 2 dogs... Well for now we have 8 puppies, and 6 of them are bottle babies and I don't have internet, so it's kinda hard for me. I'm really sorry. Also I am working on getting one of my other stories published!!!! YAY! So, Seeing as I'm planning to publish under the name Lori Angel, Look for my novels in stores... Not right away, but I'll let you know KK? Any way I'll try to write a bit on this one today. K? Love you all. Thank you SOOO MUCH for reading!
    October 18th, 2009 at 03:13pm
  • XxOreo_ninjaxX

    XxOreo_ninjaxX (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    man i love your story it really good please continue to write
    October 8th, 2009 at 04:39am
  • BlueEyedAngel2

    BlueEyedAngel2 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    I will when I can.
    June 10th, 2009 at 05:13pm
  • Greengirl95

    Greengirl95 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    This story is good so far. i like it keep going Clap
    June 2nd, 2009 at 02:19am
  • BlueEyedAngel2

    BlueEyedAngel2 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    I will try right now I don't have regular access to internet, and I don't have the story saved to my comp. but I'm going to do that now. I'm also working on several stories at once.
    May 17th, 2009 at 04:33pm
  • pyromaniac123

    pyromaniac123 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    KEEP GOING!
    i love the originality in this story, i love it.
    please keep writing soon!
    -joy
    May 14th, 2009 at 05:19am
  • BlueEyedAngel2

    BlueEyedAngel2 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    Yeah, sorry about that I have a crazy mind. Also sorry it's been so long since I posted anything. I've been haveing issues latly and before that I didn't feel like writting. I ended up in bad relationship and now I'm using that for some inspiration.. prolly not on this story but still.. And I won't be posting much because since school's out for me I won't have internet. I'll try to go to the Library and other places for WIFI if I can but other wise I'm out of luck but I will still be writting.
    May 12th, 2009 at 03:22pm
  • fscene8_me

    fscene8_me (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    Oh my. Chapter 3 was... wierd...
    May 10th, 2009 at 02:30am
  • BlueEyedAngel2

    BlueEyedAngel2 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    Sorry it's been so long.. I've had a.. rough week.
    May 4th, 2009 at 05:42am
  • liz510

    liz510 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    25
    Location:
    United States
    omg, i luv ur story, plzzzz continue!
    May 2nd, 2009 at 08:44am
  • Usuany

    Usuany (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    You should proof read all your chapter and make them better. I understand that if you do that the chapter might not turn out as you oroginally wanted it to be. But, if you do make those changes you are making it better. Isnt that what every writer does? with each little change you make your writing even better than before! Again, good chapter. Maybe make it a bit longer. Good luck! keep writing.
    April 24th, 2009 at 07:51pm
  • BlueEyedAngel2

    BlueEyedAngel2 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    Oh.. and I'll try to write more soon. I'm just kinda busy with... Well life.
    April 21st, 2009 at 05:02am
  • BlueEyedAngel2

    BlueEyedAngel2 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    Thank you all! The reason the parents watched was because they are so young and since they're nyphms they have to have sex to survive so their parents watched so they could help out if nessacary and make sure they did it right so they would survive. Sorry to freak you out. It would be really gross if parents watched us on our wedding night.. EWWW.. But that's my reason. Thank you all.
    Love,
    Ang
    Aka;
    BlueEyedAngel2
    April 21st, 2009 at 05:02am
  • Smile;

    Smile; (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    Hahaha loooved the update :D
    But it kinda freaked me out that their parents WATCHED!!!
    I was like "AAAHHH!" lol. That creeped me out lol.
    But awesome nonetheless :P
    April 21st, 2009 at 03:13am