11:11 - Comments

So I'm not into slash, but I thought this was very cute. It was the title of the story that caught my interest, to be honest. ;)

You're very good at wrtiting descriptions.. you had just a little, but not too much that it's overkill.

Gerard's and Frank's relationship is moreso hinted at in this one shot since we don't actually know of their history together, but the way you wrote how comfortable they were just lying in bed and talking to each other for five hours straight, and Gerard's, "Marry me," sounding more like a command, really show how strong their relationship is. It shows he is so confident that Frank is going to say yes because their relationship is so good.

Basaically I was kinda just awww-ing tghe rest of the way through it with Frank's portrayal of emotions and how he felt about Gerard. It was very very sweet indeed.

The last line did it for me. That was too amazingly cute, really. Like one of the comments above me said, it was so simple, but that made it good. You should be very proud of this. Great job!

Wow, that was really adorable and beautiful.
I adore everything about it. It's one of the cutest things I've ever read here.

And with that last sentence...two wishes came true.

That last line seriously sent butterflies fluttering in my stomach. :tehe:

Okay, so you know when you said that the proposal in my one-shot was cute? I think you just pwned it.

My biggest love of this is how simplistic it is. It's not overdone, or clichéd. Things aren't hyperbolised in any fashion - it's just so simple. Surprisingly, I didn't realise just how effective that can be. It's overwhelming because just when you think you know everything about these characters - their names, what they're doing, where they are - you're thrown with this sudden:

Marry me.

Oh, and I particularly loved the whole 'demand' thing. It made me chuckle a little, which is an achievement right now, let me tell you. Anyway, it makes you realise that really we don't know the fundementals of these characters: their relationship and how diverse it is. I love this a lot.

The fact they're only discussing their problems, their lives with each other is stunning, because we don't know what they're talking about, just that they've been talking. Obviously then that prompts the reader into wanting to know what they were speaking about, but obviously we can't, because there isn't excessive amounts of one-shot. Which is a shame in a way, because I would like a lot more. However it's not such a shame, because I feel it would have become too much like other Frerard's otherwise.

Oh, and I get the feeling that a certain Gerard Way might be the man in this relationship. Considering Frank is commonly the woman, but yeah.

It's amazing. You should be really proud of this - not uncertain! I'd have given my left arm to write something on this level. You truly are an incredible writer.

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That was only the cutest thing EVERZ!
I absolutely love it.
N'awwwhh!
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omg. i love this.
it made me cry...in the good way.
it was so cute. actually it was perfect.

yu are a rly good writer!.
xo

That was adorable.
I'm sorry that I can't think of anything particularly constructive to say...
But it was just so... well... adorable!