Morse Code Messages - Comments

I thought that's what she might think, but there's something there James is deeper than she realizes. Sock likes her, but not enough to care about her. I've seen this in life before.

I'm with you, I always said peer pressure didn't exist, no more can make me do what I don't want to...never had a problem with it, never followed the changing tends. Unless it was something I liked. aha. XD

I've only read the first chapter (someone kill me for being so mean) but you write incredibly well. I just want to eat your skills and take them for my own.

Beautiful.

I don't think it's moving too slowly. It's just the right pace for me. :cute:
I love how it's not got millions of descriptionsin it, it's just sort of... real. If that made any sense. (:
I feel really sorry for James, now. I can't believe Mickey's using him! omgno:
I adore your updates, and can't wait for the next one.

Mickey's hair seems like either
a light brown or a blonde. Yea.

Great update.
Makes me love James.
Sock can stick it where the sun don't shine.
I hope James sticks around, though.
Such a sweetheart.
Keep up the great work.
And I think Mickey would suit mousy, blonde hair.
The kind that blows in the mind like dust,
but shines in the sun like golden honey.

I feel like she has hair the color of honeysuckle in boom...with a redishness in light...haha. With wide green eyes that speak to loud.

Ugh...I'm soo in love with this story, I'm PROUD TO BE IT'S STALKER.

I kind of imagined Mickey having dirty blonde hair or a light brown. I dunno.

Anyway, I love how raw this story is. That probably doesn't really make sense but, I guess what I mean is that you don't make the characters/settings perfect and picturesque, which makes it that much better.
Plus you are brilliant at explaining things.

Um...it's like a movie in my head, making me want to put ink to paper...and create something as wonderful as this...I'd love to see where this goes. ^^

Mhm...I feel this story inside, it seems as if you've given it life...

A update would be nice.(:

this is absolutely amazing.
it's so original and detailed.
i feel like i'm reading a story by harper lee.
it's ingenious, and i'm 15, 16 in october.
i guess i'm getting caught up in my summer, too.
can't wait for you to update.
i don't subscribe to much, but this is definitely ace.
keep up the amazing work, love.

SKMC.

i feel terribly forgotten & unwanted, :[
but I love the story lots.

I like this James kid, he seem genuine and kind of unusual but in an ordinary way... that makes no sense whatsoever, just don't even listen to what I have to say.

Also, that was not badly written to any extent. It was quite amazing in fact, as all of your writing is.
Even Jane Austen would be jealous, heheh.

YES!AN UPDATE!YEAAAHHHHH!
Sorry about that.I just missed your writing.
So,the update was wonderful.I think I'm getting to like James,
what with his cheesy grins and awkward moments. :)
It's sad that people don't remember him much.

“I breathed in deeply, squinting my eyes down the road, looking for absolutely nothing.”

I like that line because it’s kind of true. Whenever I’m in an awkward conversation, I always try to avert my eyes to the road (if we’re outside) or somewhere else, not looking at anything particular.

The chapter wasn’t a badly written filler, it was a little short, but I hope you write the next chapter quicker :D.

I like this story lots.
Oh, and I don't like Davie. I kinda wanna cut the bitch.

I love this story! :D

I don't get why Davie is being the way she is but it annoys me. :|
Love it!

H'OH-MAH-GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. I missed two chapters? Shame on you, Tay! :file: I will write a comment now, however, so no worries. Mhmm.

I didn’t really want to go but I didn’t want to be left out either so I’d complied, following her out of my bedroom window. I love how Mickey is so . . . innocent. It's obvious she doesn't belong with the kind of group her friends are forming, but all she wants to do is fit in -- like the rest of us teenagers. It just makes her seem more real. In this sentence, she made it seem like she was this cute, little puppy who just had to follow her owner around, although maybe she'd liked it more if she could've taken a nap or something. Nonetheless, I love her. :yah

When we made our way into the barn a cluster of boys and girls were crowded around, acting like our parents at the annual New Years Eve party the town held every year. I liked how you didn't say that they were acting like a bunch of "maniacs," because -- honestly -- I've read/heard that way too often. Parties get crazy, but not that crazy -- or do they? :think: I don't know, but I really liked that sentence.

I really like Sock, even after what he did to Mickey. What a jerk, right? :grr: But I still can't help but be a little bit of a fan girl. “-- do you like chicken?” James is a frickin' weirdo, but also kind of cute. I could see myself being friends with a guy like that. Haha.

If Sock wasn’t going to like me I wasn’t going to like Sock. But -- But ---

Awesome way of explaining life? Hell yes! Life was like humidity. It was so incredibly noticeable that people tried to walk around it, they tried to ignore the uncomfortable feeling it gave you. Absolutely right. So true. Mhmmm. This also kind of fits becuase it's summer and all.

I didn’t like coffee but I figured it could be used as a good prop or something of the sorts. Good choice, I guess -- adults tend to get suspicious, but maybe they'll get more suspicious if they see a fifteen-year-old girl drinking coffee? Or maybe they don't care? Anyway, I love the whole "vinyl" thing going on. I could absolutely frickin' picture this.

Davie was one of my favorite characters at the beginning, but as the story progresses, I'm kind of doubting that. Her personality seems to change a lot, and I'm not sure I like it. Of course, she did seem like one of those "mean girls" at first, but I doubted it. But now . . . hmm.

"He’s going to stick himself inside of me and let me feel things I’ve never felt in my entire life.” -- Made me giggle. :tehe:

Oh my Llama -- Davie is evil! Can't wait to see where this is going . . . Actually, I never knew that it would come down to this. I had a totally different and bizzare idea. Anyway, lovin' it! You're amazing.

I just got home from a party and am utterly exhausted but I feel the need to comment, so in the interest of full disclosure this will most likely make no sense and be long and ramble-y. but a comment is a comment so I don’t think it matters.

wow...w-o-w...wowee zowee...and so on and so forth. this could be the fatigue talking but that last chapter (chapter 6?) was mind blowing. I don't really connect with key because I've always been immune to that kind of pressure to fit into a certain place, but there's more meat to her than just being that confused little girl. yeah, she's susceptible to the influence of her friends (I kinda feel the need to add quotation marks around the word friends but I don't wanna seem like too much of an ass) but she's wise too. you didn’t typecast her or put her into this mold. It’s what makes the story so unique and it made me realize how good of a writer you are. not that I hadn’t realized before or anything:) I wish there was another word I could use instead of unique but I’m too lazy to do my own feelings justice, atm. I’m even using chatspeak.

Actually, now that I think about it, I do connect with key. I’m not sure if it was intentional or if it’s my own interpretation but you somehow managed to convey this ineffable emotion into words into this lovely story. I can’t even describe it but I’ve definitely felt it. Like during the scene with that Davie bitch, it almost seems like she’s detached from the situation. I mean, I know by the context that she was upset with the whole awkwardness, but she’s so composed even when she’s upset. I don’t think I’m saying what I’m thinking and it bothers me. I probably should copy and paste that up into the paragraph above this one but I’m too goshdarn lazy to revise. Oh, and that last bit about the photobooth was insane and I wish I’d thought of it first.

It’s a good jealous though, lol

Your thoughts are mine exactly.Davie is a completely bitchy arsehole.Grr.
Well,thanks for the update.I was so excited when I saw the little email that said you had another chapter out.But it has a downside too.I'd rather pass the time reading your stories than doing what I'm supposed to.Homework.Ugh.The links to your updates are too tempting for me to ignore.Curse your skill.>:P

I fucking hate Davie. Ugh. She's only going to make Key's insecurities even worse. :grr:

I think I hate her because she reminds me a lot of a girl I know. When she was 15 and I was 14, she would do the exact same thing: she would go out and hook up with boys and drink (and back then I was totally against that...haha things have changed since then), and then she would brag about it to me, just to make me feel bad.

It's totally evident that Davie's doing this to make herself feel better by putting Key down. She can't accept the fact that Sock wouldn't like her and instead would like someone as "lame" as Key.

Or maybe she just enjoys being a c*nt.
(I love that swear word...It's so bad, but it's so fun to say. But I always put a * instead of a u because I'm afraid I'll be banned for using such bad language.)
:tehe:

But at the same time you need her in the story. It makes it more interesting. And now your readers want Davies to die, so of course we'll keep coming back to read more

I hope she doesn't have sex with Sock, though. I mean...she's 15. She might think she's the queen of the world and she owns everyone, but in reality she's still just a kid. Fifteen is young. And she's probably the most insecure out of all of her friends, which is why she acts like that.
Um, yes. I totally just psychoanalyzed your characters. :weird

I totally love this story because it reminds me of the hard times in my late childhood/early teen years.