The Phoenix - Comments

Hmm well let's see what happens. Don't kill me after the next update though.

Jimmy had best get hsi booty inside. NOW!

This was a good update and I'm glad she had the guts to go for her phone. She's given those girls a good chance at making it out alive.

I hope he talks to Jimmy soon too. Then again what seems so simple to you and me may not be to some one else. Remember this dude is hearing voices.

I hope that Jimmy finally broke this guy's resolve! It seems to me that he's getting desperate and if the voices aren't going to help, I hope he's ashamed enough to talk to Jimmy and let him help!

Hey thanks! Yes I know it's a side of Jimmy we don't get to see often. Later on you'll also get to see a different side of all the guys. Thanks for commenting.

What a truly interesting concept for our Jimmy! I'm very intrigued and hope for more soon. This is well written!