Hemorrhage. - Comments

You totally made me cry.
I'm sitting here on the couch, crying tears of happiness for Emilie, and my mother's looking at me funny, but it's definitely worth it.
This is honestly one of my favourite stories I've ever read, either on Mibba or otherwise, and I'm honestly sorry that I haven't commented on every chapter (Maybe that'll be a project for a rainy day?). I love your writing style, and how developed every single one of your characters is, whether they're an actual person or someone you've created. I feel like Emilie is someone I've actually known, rather than someone I've been reading a story about. I'm so happy that she's gotten a happy ending, because I feel like she honestly deserves it.
The ending of this story was just...perfect. It tied up all of the loose ends, answered all of the questions I might have had. Emilie working for TWLOHA, dating John publicly...everything makes sense. I like how, in a way, things have come full circle for Emilie and those around her.
Loved this so, so much! Keep up the amazingwork!
...And I think I follow you on Tumblr?

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be realistic took the words out of my mouth!
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This story has really opened my eyes to anorexia and has truly inspired me. In most stories people draw out the characters flaws then shove two people together at the end, but you really made it seem like Emilie and John were ment for each other. And i LOVE how you kept us all guessing about who was sending the mean text messages, that really kept me guess and waiting for more (not that the story in general didn't keep me wanting more)
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This story defidently deserves 2 thumbs up (i would give it 10 thumbs up but i only have 2 thumbs). I love this story and where you took it, pretty much everything you did with it, and about it.
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Im sad now though because its over!! whats gonna keep me coming back to mibba now that one of my favorite stories is over? :(
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THIS STORY WAS TRUELY ONE OF THE BEST STORIES HERE ON MIBBA.
good luck in with writing a book! im sure if you doo it will be AMAZINNNNNGGGG!!! :D
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First off I am soo happy about the ending but sad because it's over. This has seriously been the greatest thing that I have ever found and read on Mibba. Everything from the story line to the great descriptions about Emilie and each character. Two thumbs up!! The ending was perfect. I am so glad that she's on her road to being healthy again and living life how she should have been living it. She definitely deserves a happy ending especially with what she had been through. I'm happy you wrote this and good luck in the future because I know you have the talent to publish a book!!
Simply amazing.
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This is possibly the best story i have read on this site. I don't generally comment (because i am very lazy), but i really enjoyed reading it and i hope you write another story soon :) x

Awww. I'm quite thrilled with this ending. I was pretty harsh about chapter twenty-seven, but this completely and totally changed my mind. This story is definitely one of my all-time favorites, mainly because you make the whole anorexia thing believable. It's not all "pity me, I hate food and starve myself and cut myself and don't use proper grammar or spelling in my stories." I can often relate to some of the stuff Emilie went through, and many of the girls I know can too.

When I first began reading this story (around chapter seven, I think), I was skeptical and only reading it because I was bored and couldn't sleep. But by the end of chapter two, I was hooked. I've gone from hating John, speculating who the infamous text-messenger was (and almost crying when I found out it was dear Pat), and wanting to hit Molly with a frying pan all in the space of an hour while rereading Hemorrhage. So many times I've been busted for staying up waaay too late reading the newest update. I'm glad I found this gem.

Overall, I love and will miss this story like you can't believe (well.... you probably can, but still). The ending ties up the loose ends without being cheesy or a total cliché. It's believable yet sweet, which is quite the skill to master. I'm quite jealous. Your writing skills are beyond inspirational, and one day I seriously hope you publish a book.

Just, wow. I have so much admiration for you. The way you handled this overall subject matter was fantastic. And I love how concious you've been throughout, you know this is a touchy subject and you acknowledge that fact. You haven't advertised eating disorders, nor glamourised them, if anything this should steer people away from them. If I had a hat on, I'd seriously take it off. I'm just in awe of how you've pulled this off in such a heartbreaking and beautiful way, but with such a brilliant ending.

I loved the end. It's nice to see Emelie has learnt a lot from her experiences. She's been very real throughout this. She's an average girl put in an not so average situation. I'm so happy she managed to put herself on the road to recovery. I'm glad she found the strength to do it herself as well, instead of being encouraged or forced by someone else. It seemed like John was her world and the thought of losing him snapped something in her mind. For everything she's been through, selfish or not, she really did deserve a happy ending. You rounded everything off so well, finally giving us a reason for Pat's texts, which is valid enough, but I'd still like to slap him round the chops with a wet fish.

You've written this beautifully throughout, the characters thoughts and feelings were excuted really well, and I think the way Emelie feels in the very beginning is something that a lot, if not, all of us can relate to. She has such an interesting story, and it's all very believable and I'm sad it's over, but I'm happy she doesn't have to suffer anymore. And I hope this isn't the last thing you post on here, it'd be a shame not to share your talent some more. (:

It sucks that I read this in the morning but I'm just commenting now, almost 10 hours later. Like, everything I wanted to say - those spur of the moment choice words - evaporated from my mind. Sucks uberly. I guess I'll have to make it up as I go.

This last chapter was just...perfect. I don't know what to say. It fit with everything so well. I can't think of a better way to have ended this. It didn't scream "Happily Ever After" but it did yell "As Close As It Darn Gets." Emelie is so different from so many characters I had encountered and not just because of the anorexia. She's just...her own person. So many characters I think "oh she's like so and so" but I can't think of one I can compare to Emelie. And it's a good thing. :D
Each character is individually unique and in a completely different way. Even if most of them are from The Maine, haha. I won't be Pat's biggest fan anytime soon though.
It sucks that you didn't have as much inspiration for this as you should have but I guess that's what Sam's here for. When in doubt or in complete darkness, Sam's where to go. :] Her writing inspires me in so many ways. And I'm going to conclude this before I bring Hummingbird into the convo!

I enjoyed this story more than my words can tell you. It isn't like anything on this site and you should always keep that in mind. Standing above most of the crap here isn't hard (haha) but changing people's thoughts, the way they see life and everything else you've done for everyone through this story is pretty hard to accomplish.

I applaud you. :D

I hope you're writing another masterpiece because I'm not ready to say goodbye to your writing. I even got a friend to fall for this story and all it took was for them to read the first chapter. :D

Well, I'm going to stop writing now. XD

PS: I'll have more self control now because every time I want to crack, I'll think "Emelie stuck to hers and so will I" I doubt it will work for studies though...

PPS: xD

i read this entire story yesterday, and it is so fucking amazing.

i adore the fact that, even thought they were best friends and ended up together, you took the plot into a completely different direction. i feel like you portrayed The Maine boys perfectly. (although, i was upset with pat about the messages, but i get where he's coming from).

i really love this story, and now, i'm quite sad it's over. :(

I really loved this story.
Just the right balance of romance and heartache!

Keep writing, you're awesome.
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The ending was great! i'm happy the got together

-Silent Subscriber - Rachelx

be realistic; took the words right out of my mouth :]

Loved the story <3

I WOULD CRY RIGHT NOW BUT I'M IN SCHOOL.
I haulted my learning process for Hemorrhage.
I've cried over Hemorrhage.
I've gotten pissed at Johno, Pat, and various others because of Hemorrhage.
I've learned things from Hemorrhage.
I've most likely learned things about myself from Hemorrhage, though I cannot completely pinpoint all of them.

This really was a great story and I know I enjoyed it as much as the next person. I hope you do become an author one day, because I'll be looking for your stories.

The ending was brilliant! I loved it so much!
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Totally beautiful ending <3
though, I am sad to see this is finished. Seeing the notification in my inbox really brightened my day :)
I haven't checked yet, but if your tumblr username isn't on your page, could you tell me it? And I'll follow you :D I have a feeling I'd like the stuff you post...

amazing.

I loved how the previous chapter was written...month by month..just explaining the situation without too many or too less details.

I like your writing very much; good job :)

One thing I loved about this story was that it focused on the girl more than it did on the boy, or their relationship. It was very interesting:)

I also liked the "intro" scene of the last chapter...how you fast forward and then just explained what happened. loved it. :)

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Simply amazing, thank you for writing such an amazing story.
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You're my best friend and my inspiration bby :) love you and the end. Sad to see it go, but so proud that you finally managed to conclude it. I'm glad we went on this journey together, you know?

i really loved this story. i've had troubles with my weight all my life [ sometimes i'm "too big," others i'm "too small" ] and this story just... i dunno. really helped. like, majorly. and you're awesome for writing it and i'm sad to see it end, but i'm also happy to know that it didn't end in a sad way. and i'm also glad you didn't give it an "omg-uberly-tastichappy" ending because.. that's not really realistic (: so, thank you so much for writing this <3

Thank you so much for writing this story. It has meant so much to me. It gave me something to look forward during the day. Although I am sad it is over, it ended beautifully. Very well done.

I sincerely hope that you will continue to write stories with such passion and depth. I look forward to reading more from you.