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  • Cobweb.

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    Alright, alright before I start I have to say that tears actually sprung from my eyes from this one. I love how you compared the city to the person' s eyes. I've read a lot of pieces that have involved eyes, they are almost common, but nothing like the. They always desribe the color or something, but this was just...I'm not ever sure. I think its amazing how you were able to capture the narrators two loves. I mean, if I'm on the right track at all I feel that the person belongs in a city, and I suppose belongs in this person eyes. I feel like it's a love story in the simplest form. It's truely beautiful. I loved all one hundred words.
    Cry :arms:
    May 15th, 2009 at 03:48am
  • zillaidma

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    With this, anyone could imagine and want to live in a city ;)
    May 10th, 2009 at 07:24am
  • kwon jiyong.

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    Twas beautiful darling. I loved the way that you described the city.
    But I think it might be: "that no person could ever grow tired of seeing."
    May 7th, 2009 at 04:25am
  • Glamophonic

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    So descriptive and slightly surreal in a wonderful way.
    I really loved it.
    May 7th, 2009 at 04:07am
  • Antagonist

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    Omg, Kim, it's beautiful!

    I love it so much!

    I could close my eyes and just feel it.
    April 28th, 2009 at 07:38am
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