AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW!!!!! -about sums up my mood after reading this. Luca is beyond amazingly adorable. Red is so.....aw! but not that he's always aw so much as 'aaaaaaaaw poor thing'! Also, poor rocking horse...... :(
Aaaaaw, Started reading this properly today and seriously loving it. Put it this way, my attention span is contained. Luca is so adorable! Wants him tied to my house now......
Yay! Updates! Cabbage! (runs around room clapping hands) Seriously, I'm very proud of you for continuing. Please have more regular updates, I know I'm not one to talk, but don't keep me waiting that long again! (collapses onto keyboard)
sorryyyy!!!!!!!!!!! I'll get writing on holiday and hopefully have something to put up or to be expanded when i get home in about two weeks, is that ok??
Finally! I thought this story was never going to see the light of day again. You don't deserve another comment for the long wait you've put me through. Roar! Gad you updated! Do so soon again pwease.
I've never read/watched beauty and the beast *please don't attack me lol* so I'm obviously missing the comparison but I doubt it would make much difference =D
Ha, I've never liked much the beauty and the beast's story, seemed too much cliche in my opinion, but you totally showed it in a new light.. although the beast sounds a bit too beast-y.. he's really scary lol :)
Aw, Loca's sooo sweet haha... Although I didn't quit understand what he is ecxaly... a clarify would be nice *cough cough* :)
You're writing is great! I loved the long chapters... Please update as soon as you can!! haha greedy me.. :)
PAGE TWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :) ahem. anyway. I LOVE Luca, but you know that. He's mine, all mine mine mine *grabs Luca and puts him in her cupboard* I love him. And I love Beastie, though not as much as Luca, but still I love him and his malicious grin and his angry.. ness. And I love this whole story!!!! More more more more more <3
I don't have time for a cracked out comment today but good job my darling, as always CONGRATS ON PAGE TWO WOO ^_____^ Mother is yelling at me to bake the cake now >.>
Oh! I just found out something really important! Don't know if you know but the number of comments don't boost a story's rating, instead the number of readers and subscribers do so I am subscribing and I'm still going to comment!
Watch your viewpoint. Paragraph 3 versus paragraph 4 switch the way it's written, and it's kinda annoying and ruins the flow of it :\ You do that a few other times, too. Very descriptive, as usual I dislike Mrs. Hett for some unknown reason she seems like she would lure children into her candy house spooonnnss she should use a SPORK cause they win
BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG thank you to you three lovely commentors.
You really do brighten up my day and i'm so glad that you like this story and are willing to tell me. I have seven other readers that aren't. -sad face-
if you have any question just ask me
....i just might not give you the right answer...=PP
No i probably would but if my ideas change then it might end up being the wrong answer if you get me. ^_^