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  • Howl

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    :D My hero. Looking forward to the next update!
    October 6th, 2010 at 05:14pm
  • toxic infatuation.

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    This is becoming so epic. I love it M! And I agree with Yxita, Luca is too adorable.
    May 27th, 2010 at 07:30pm
  • Yxita

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    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW!!!!! -about sums up my mood after reading this. Luca is beyond amazingly adorable. Red is so.....aw! but not that he's always aw so much as 'aaaaaaaaw poor thing'! Also, poor rocking horse...... :(
    May 23rd, 2010 at 06:40pm
  • Yxita

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    I love how certain elements of the story refer back to the film. Like the soup and the dinner. Also, I loved Mrs. Hett's monologue. All good!
    May 23rd, 2010 at 04:50pm
  • Yxita

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    Aaaaaw, Started reading this properly today and seriously loving it. Put it this way, my attention span is contained. Luca is so adorable! Wants him tied to my house now......
    May 23rd, 2010 at 04:35pm
  • Howl

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    Yay! Updates! Cabbage! (runs around room clapping hands) Seriously, I'm very proud of you for continuing. Please have more regular updates, I know I'm not one to talk, but don't keep me waiting that long again! (collapses onto keyboard)
    April 30th, 2010 at 07:56pm
  • Danio 'n goch

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    -hides behind chair-

    sorryyyy!!!!!!!!!!!
    I'll get writing on holiday and hopefully have something to put up or to be expanded when i get home in about two weeks, is that ok??
    March 24th, 2010 at 12:22am
  • Howl

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    Finally! I thought this story was never going to see the light of day again. You don't deserve another comment for the long wait you've put me through. Roar! Gad you updated! Do so soon again pwease.
    March 23rd, 2010 at 08:12am
  • Myungsoo

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    I love this!!!!

    More, more more! :D
    March 23rd, 2010 at 03:36am
  • toxic infatuation.

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    Wow I love it! Clap Beautiful style of writing Maz!
    March 23rd, 2010 at 12:31am
  • toxic infatuation.

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    Wow! I didn't expect to like this kind of story but I LOVE it! I'm not much for words on comments. All I can say is I LOVE IT!!!
    January 16th, 2010 at 11:15pm
  • Rukas

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    Just finished chapter 1, it's sounding so good!

    I've never read/watched beauty and the beast *please don't attack me lol* so I'm obviously missing the comparison but I doubt it would make much difference =D
    September 29th, 2009 at 01:11am
  • OMG TOAST!

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    Whee!

    Ha, I've never liked much the beauty and the beast's story, seemed too much cliche in my opinion, but you totally showed it in a new light.. although the beast sounds a bit too beast-y.. he's really scary lol :)

    Aw, Loca's sooo sweet haha... Although I didn't quit understand what he is ecxaly... a clarify would be nice *cough cough* :)

    You're writing is great! I loved the long chapters... Please update as soon as you can!! haha greedy me.. :)

    ~Keep it up!~
    August 22nd, 2009 at 10:33pm
  • Howl

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    (falls to knees) Must...have...next chapter (collapses)

    Thankie for da link to da picture I drew you! I hope people like it as much as joo did! PS...I'm Howl nowies
    July 18th, 2009 at 10:17pm
  • JENNandBLITZ.

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    PAGE TWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :)
    ahem. anyway. I LOVE Luca, but you know that. He's mine, all mine mine mine *grabs Luca and puts him in her cupboard* I love him. And I love Beastie, though not as much as Luca, but still I love him and his malicious grin and his angry.. ness.
    And I love this whole story!!!! More more more more more <3
    July 14th, 2009 at 03:42pm
  • bethanito

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    I don't have time for a cracked out comment today
    but good job my darling, as always
    CONGRATS ON PAGE TWO
    WOO
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    Mother is yelling at me to bake the cake now >.>
    July 14th, 2009 at 03:39pm
  • Love.Doesn't.Love.Me

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    I love it...Lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove it!

    I can't wait to read more!
    July 13th, 2009 at 11:00pm
  • Howl

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    Oh! I just found out something really important! Don't know if you know but the number of comments don't boost a story's rating, instead the number of readers and subscribers do so I am subscribing and I'm still going to comment!
    June 15th, 2009 at 11:01am
  • bethanito

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    Watch your viewpoint. Paragraph 3 versus paragraph 4 switch the way it's written, and it's kinda annoying and ruins the flow of it :\ You do that a few other times, too.
    Very descriptive, as usual
    I dislike Mrs. Hett for some unknown reason
    she seems like she would lure children into her candy house
    spooonnnss
    she should use a SPORK
    cause they win
    June 15th, 2009 at 07:29am
  • Danio 'n goch

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    BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG thank you to you three lovely commentors.

    You really do brighten up my day and i'm so glad that you like this story and are willing to tell me. I have seven other readers that aren't. -sad face-

    if you have any question just ask me

    ....i just might not give you the right answer...=PP

    No i probably would but if my ideas change then it might end up being the wrong answer if you get me. ^_^

    Thanks again!!
    June 14th, 2009 at 01:37pm