August 11th, 2007 at 12:00pm
My Jesus.
Poor Jay! But the slash was...droolorific :tehe:
That was beautifully and precisely written. I loved it like I love cake.
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My Jesus.
Poor Jay! But the slash was...droolorific :tehe:
That was beautifully and precisely written. I loved it like I love cake.
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THAT WAS AMAZING!
Maaan, I wish I could write like you!!July 20th, 2007 at 07:46am -
Good wow of course.July 19th, 2007 at 02:48pm
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- Wow. o.o That's all I can say. Wow.
July 19th, 2007 at 01:59pm -
Wow. o.o That's all I can say. Wow.July 19th, 2007 at 01:53pm
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WOW...Jess that was so fucking beautiful and I loved it. The emotion, was raw, and flawless. You are a great writer I don't give a fuck what you say. You're great.July 19th, 2007 at 01:49pm
He liked his about Dray, he was kind and sweet. Of course he could hot wire a car as fast as any Pro could, but that didn't matter because Jay could cuss out any living thing in a matter of minutes.
^That made me smile when I read that.
They were alike, yet they were different and that worked for them.
^I love that line. There relationship was so pure and innocent it was also cute to.
He closed his eyes tight, an image of Dray smiling flashed across his closed eyes.
^That was painful to read and after reading that I was very shocked. I thought of millions of way were Jay could have lived and everything may have not been fine, but Dray and Jay would have been happy together.
Lonna was right, thank god. That was very touching and well written all the basics flowed outstanding together. This made me wonder about what could have happen in the aftermath you know...like would Dray ever find out....did Dray kill himself. I have so many questions with no answers.
remarkable baby, any writer that makes the reader think is a pretty damn good writer in my book.