I enjoyed the second chapter. I admit it IS a little long, but nothing you can't fix. Other then that I hope you c ontinue even tho you said you were not. Unless I read that wrong...I tend to do that. But anywho...keep it up. I'll try and read your other stories soon, but I have to get ready for one of my friends to come over. She wants to proof some stuff I wrote.
June 24th, 2009 at 06:42pm