Crystal Rose - Comments

serizenna (100)

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To everyone I finally have some spare time on my hands so I will finish this story. I am sorry its been so long without an update but I hope you all read it anyways

June 25th, 2011 at 02:00am

janellevengeance (150)

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nice. very nice.

June 8th, 2009 at 09:31pm

Ave.Maria. (100)

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Omg I love it :) Interesting names btw x

June 8th, 2009 at 05:08pm

Steve-oObsessed (100)

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o wow this is good keep updatin

June 5th, 2009 at 06:05am

fluffylova (100)

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OMG OMG I WANT MORE!!!

June 4th, 2009 at 07:55am

devilgirldarkangel (100)

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Wonderful story I would like to know how it ends and if Princess Masa lives or dies.
Hopefully the young princess lives.

May 31st, 2009 at 02:13am

fluffylova (100)

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Omg i loved it... I want more... but you can fix your Grammar and Spelling a little :) but anyways im going to subscribe cause i want more now!!

May 26th, 2009 at 01:57pm

katherine_ann001 (150)

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Hello,
You need to go back and fix your grammar/spelling/basic sentence structures. For instance, in one of the first lines, you have two sentences combined without capitols and punctuation marks. This could be a potential problem for an inexperienced reader if they can't realize the difference between two phrases.

I like the premise of this story. I could see Crystal Rose on a bookshelf someday. Again, just make these few corrections in the story and it will be 95% there! Great job!

May 21st, 2009 at 12:43am