My Peace - Comments

  • Saint.

    Saint. (450)

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    One Shot For One Shot!

    Nevermind the first line capturing my attention, the first few words grabbed it! beams of sunlight tried to creep almost vainly... is such a nice line.
    For such a small piece, this is brilliant. It made me feel all safe and peaceful. I adored it and I have no idea why this doesn't have any comments.
    Your vocabulary and descriptions are amazing, btw. In Love
    June 2nd, 2009 at 04:04pm