When Dining with the Devil - Comments

first off, great story.
the imagery of the restaurant was terrific. i was a little sad in the end when you destroyed it. :(
the song went along nicely and took on a different meaning as it got toward the more vicious parts of the story.

haha, i was a little confused for a moment reading, realizing that Gerard Way and Lyn-Z were the characters. puts a different spin on everything, yet again.

i'm a fan of any and everything morbid, but didn't really find the ending sad. it was the devil and portraying how madly in love with God, wanting her to stay in hell and just so happened the only way to do so was to kill her.
makes sense in that roundabout completely insane sorta way.

all in all, i found this story a very entertaining read, like all of your work.

A very vicious ending. And I've seen the likes of a few in your stories before, but I don't think I was fully expecting it.

There's always a certain atmosphere to this alternate universe you capture these guys in. Like the best car crash (that sounds horrible, but whev), a hint of sadness, a smidgen of morbidness, but too fascinating to break away from. Absolutely brimming with LOTS of emotion.

Wow.

That was more brutal than I ever expected you to finish that story. It's quite a contrast to the happy, fluffy ending of the original story. That being said, I thought it was fantastic. The wording was brilliant and natural, the descriptions and actions blended together perfectly, balanced.

I love how everything suddenly started to shatter as soon as Gerard started to keep her there against her will- and he actually killed her. Jeez, you said it would be really sad, but still. I didn't think you'd actually make him kill her- though maybe I should've.

I was skeptical, at first, about how completely calm and collected Ande was the entire time, but thinking back, it just seems to kind of...fit, and I'm not sure exactly why. I wouldn't expect it from him, but with the way you wrote the story, it seems that was the only way it could have gone.

That was...yeah. Sad. Morbidly beautiful, in a way, though. I loved every bit of it. It's so obvious how much he cares about her, even after what he put her through. I wonder if he'll ever get in control of himself and feel bad for what he did, or if he just totally lost any sanity he previously managed to keep when Lyn said it was time for her leave?

It was brilliant. Well, just like your stuff always is, I guess.

Certainly one of my favourites.