Lazy Sunday Mornings - Comments

Oh my God, that was the sweetest thing I ever read. <3

aww! this is so sweet!
i loved it. you have a great way with words :D

<3xo

My god I'm sorry I don't have time to comment much now.
But I loved that story. It was so sweet and heartfelt, and behind all the fluff it held so much meaning and love.
Gah, it was beautiful. 430 freakin' words?! I don't know how you did it.
But what came out sure was amazing.

OMG!
Gosh, these are the stories I live for.
I love this.

You don't wanna listen to how 430 words made my lil' heart melt, but omg, this was so sweet.
I'm seriously like stalking you right now, I keep reading stuff you write but never get around to comment. My bad. You should know you are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors here in Mibba though. This one-shot confirms it.

I love how it does have that special feeling of a lazy morning, when you kinda wake up and you just stay in bed for a while longer. And Gerard and Frank, at the beginning, was just so well described. Then the little boy :shifty I think anything that has a kid in it is going to get to me, but this was just so... adorable. But it had sort of a warm feeling to it, I don't know if I'm making myself clear because usually I suck at that, but what I mean it's that this wasn't absurd and corny like most fics with a kid in them are.
“Morning sport,” Gerard smiled, extending the arm that wasn’t wrapped around Franks shoulders out to lightly tap Dylan on the nose. The boy responded by once again letting out that high-pitch childish giggle, muttering something about ‘Daddy being silly’ but no-one could really be sure since Dylan still didn’t know how to talk properly.
I fell in love with all of it, but this paragraph right here might be my favorite. Perhaps it's just me, but I couldn't help to notice how you insert that 'daddy being silly' part. Frank is the biological father, as I found out towards the end, so when I recalled this tiny bit, I died a little inside. Seriously.

It had the perfect balance for being fluffy. I don't usually go for extremely fluffy things, something about the way some people approach the matter puts me off, but this was really well written and -allow me another melt-

Beautiful.

That was fluffy, and very adorable.
I don't think I've ever commented anything by you, but there's always a first time. And now I'm glad I found your mini-pimp on the boards. I loved this.

Even though they were so different, they seemed to almost blend into one, fitting together like two pieces of a puzzle.
This line is still left to explain, because we do know what makes Frank and Dylan s different, as the narrator described us Gerard's vision of the tattoos and the youth, both in front of him. It sure marks the different between father and soon, and apart from the blood relation, there might be some small things that make the two so similar and fitting-like-piece-of-puzzle. I don't want to know what, though, as I prefer to have my own seconds guesses about the characters.

I'm glad everyone in there was able to love the little boy, no matter if Frank was the only biological father in there. We don't know and don't need to know what happened to them to make it stay that way, as there is some character missing here (Dylan sure didn't fall off the sky!), but we don't need that other person. It's just perfect with the two men that love each and the little boy, who is so loved by the two lovers. I feel happier now.

This was just supposed to be fluffy, and you did make me smile crazily at the small pitter-patter easiness of this 430-worded story. Good luck with the contest :cute:

I loved this ... it was so sweet :)
LottieP xx