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  • serizenna

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    I want to make this clear I know several people who have had abortions an they all have read this story and agreed with it points. I am sorry some of you want to take offense to it but if the people who told me there abortion felt judge I doubt they would talk to me even now and we all are still great friends.
    May 21st, 2011 at 11:31pm
  • Scripted_Siren

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    not that i'm calling you mean... yoou know what i mean.
    November 29th, 2010 at 11:09pm
  • Scripted_Siren

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    i'm not tryna yell at anyone, understand that, just hoping we can all stop being so mean.
    November 29th, 2010 at 11:08pm
  • Scripted_Siren

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    hey guys, if your pro choice, why are you reading this? jw, are you trynna make yourself mad? now, I'm tottally behind serizenna, but even if I wasnt, you guys need to back down a bit. we don't need either side getting all up in each other's face.
    November 29th, 2010 at 11:08pm
  • Sakura Zenna

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    beautiful work...very very touching
    October 26th, 2010 at 09:41am
  • Diantha Darkness

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    Okay, really chick. You are buggin the heck outta me. I know people that have gotten abortions and they feel bad yes- but they also could not handle a child in that point of their lives. You really need to watch what you're saying to an audience because you could be offensive. This really does offend me because i've personally been through a lot of these things, and i don't think it's right for you to say more than half of them and put us down like that. So next time maybe you should grow up and think about what you're writing :] have a nice day.
    October 29th, 2009 at 12:25am
  • Delightfully Weird

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    I'm pro-life and I am dead-set against abortion, but you take it way too far. I've had friends go through it, and although they are sad about it, they don't regret it because they were not ready or able to handle it at the time. I believe that if someone--especially a young teenage girl--feels that the only way to continue on with their lives is to have an abortion, that it's wrong to do that. However, I won't bitch them out or try to make them feel any worse by telling them how badly they screwed up. It's not nice to judge girls who have had abortions so harshly, because you do not know what kind of position they were in.
    I'm only saying this because I think you're offending a lot of people. It's great that you have an opinion and that you believe that abortion is wrong, but you shouldn't have to criticize the people who have done it.
    So, please, if you could try to be less judgmental in the future, it would be appreciated by a lot of readers.
    October 29th, 2009 at 12:14am
  • Beautifully Chaotic

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    Are you kidding me?! I completely agree with Dirnty Girl. Have you ever had an abortion? You should not be talking about it unless you've gone through it. People don't need to be healed or preached to. I think your Author's Note is completely ridiculous! You don't know how to spell and don't know what you're talking about.
    October 28th, 2009 at 10:11pm
  • Dirnty Girl

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    Besides the horrible spelling, grammar, and plot, you know what really irks me about this story?

    The author's notes.

    You sound so snobby, so holier-than-thou, high-and-mighty. You say that you won't judge people who have had abortions and that you're not hypocritical, yet you go right back around and say that people who have had abortions hate people who are pregnant or have had children.

    That is horrendously ignorant. Who are you to judge these people? Who are you to say what they are? That is an atrocious generalization, and a wrong one.

    If a woman has an abortion, she can get pregnant again. She is not doomed to a life without children.

    I am pro-choice. If a mother is not emotionally or physically ready to give birth, I'm okay with abortion. If the fetus is destroying her body, I'm okay with it. If she was raped, I'm okay with it. If she would rather terminate the pregnancy rather than go through the pain of going through labor just to give the child up for adoption, I'M OKAY WITH IT.

    However, if she's a bimbo and keeps getting knocked up only to get an abortion...well, there should be a limit.

    You say it's ending a potential life...well, what about when a man masturbates, or a woman has her period? That's destroying potential life.

    Long comment, I know. I just hate being preached to.

    I'm pro-choice. I'm always going to be pro-choice. Stop trying to convert me.
    July 24th, 2009 at 01:55am
  • fluffylova

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    aww wow this is such a touching story... wish i could write touching stuff :)
    June 6th, 2009 at 03:08pm
  • Perihelion_

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    Touching
    June 6th, 2009 at 07:46am
  • adjacent.justice

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    Ah-ha...

    I'll be sure to continue when I have some sense in my head. Lack of sleep.
    June 6th, 2009 at 07:14am
  • devilgirldarkangel

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    It's a very good story. Very strongly written. I loved it i would love to know how it ends though you and your cliff hangers lol.
    May 31st, 2009 at 01:23am