Wowww. I really LOATHE Patrick's parents, I would say hate, but I don't think hate can describe the fire they have ignited in me! RAWR! I hope Patrick knocks some sense in them, or they just stop showing up!!!
Okay, so I just finished reading all that you have of this story (of course after reading the prequel) and I am serioulsy in love with this story :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P I love it, and I can't wait for more updates :) :D :P
Dude, I would give my left arm to wake up to Ben Eager & Adam Burish cooking me breakfast. Actually, I'd probably die of excitement. And seriously, Sharpie's parents suck...hardcore. More soon. :]
Ugh. Seriously, his parents can go crawl back into the hole they came out of.
Jerks.
But other than THOSE FOOLS, I really loved this chapter. Patrick is so amazing, and his speech about why he loved her made me melt.
Ben and Adam making them breakfast was so sweet, and I got a kick out of Adam's shirt. I know Patrick is going to be SO AMAZING with little girls. *swoon*
So I came back to see you'd updated a fair few chapters on this: happy times. But I miscalculated how much I'd already read and missed out a chapter so got all confused, ha. It's really sad his granddad died but I like how she did the Indian ceremony type thing to help Patrick. I'm so happy they're having girls, I can imagine Patrick will be super sweet with them, even if he is just a little bit sad about them not being boys. And I'm going to check out your new story later too, yay!
He is so perfect. Sigh. Seeing him this weekend, being two feet away from him. Just Wow. I kept thinking about this story. Lmfao. Them having girls is going to be so studly and adorable. I just. AWWWWW.
So, I took a picture with Patrick Sharp today, and all I could think about when he touched me was this story. Which is awkward. And hot.
He was in head to toe black today too, just like in Lily's pics, haha. Woaah. Trippy.
He is beyond fucking gorgeous. Oh God. *fans self*
I toos a picture with Burish too, with my friend, and he was all "Ladies," with a deep voice. I almost snorted.
Anyhow, the story. Haha. So, I know it's upsetting to Sharpie that he's having girls, but it's going to be fucking adoreable, I know it. (He posed with little girls today during the pictures and every woman in line swooned. EVERY. SINGLE. ONE.)
And ah jeez. The parents. WHAT HAPPENED BACK HOME?? But I agree with you about the Patrick Sharp being perfect thing. So true. =)
Once again, I'd like to say that Patrick Sharp is the perfect man. I'm picturing him with 2 baby girls and I'm smiling...so adorable. And uhhh, make his parents go away...they suck. Can't wait for more. :]
Awww, Patrick is perfect. But, honestly, I couldn't see him any other way either, haha! But, his parents are complete assholes. And, I'm glad that he told them off and was quick to defend Ana and his girls.
And, speaking of the twin girls, I kind of like that you chose to go with that. I can totally see him being the protective father that says he won't let his daughters date until they're 30 and crying everytime they leave for summer camp or something like that, haha!
I still think it's adorable that the babies kick whenever Patrick's around. And, picturing Ben trying to do any kind of yoga, let alone yoga for people that are pregnant is a hilarious image in my mind!
I'm glad that Ana and Adam made up, and that everything's okay between everyone. And, that ceremony for Patrick's grandfather was so sweet.
“I can’t bend like that shit, seriously, I’m six foot three, two hundred and thirty pounds. I’m a brick, I don’t bend,” Ben shouted.
SIGH. That's one sexy discrtiption. I can't wait to meet him this weekend. YAY CONVENTION. I love this story and the Adam thing... So godddamn sweet. More soon!!