Eyes as Dead as You Can See - Comments

This was incredibly sad And I loved it.
It's beautifully written and just...perfect. I don't even know how else to explain it...I loved it. Seriously.

One Shot For One Shot.

I absolutely loved it, though I don't really know Cat Casino/the other person. It was extremely well-written. I could really picture myself in the main character's shoes and feeling the love and heartbreak.

It was amazingly heartbreaking and I admit it almost made me cry at times. It was a great one-shot and you're an amazing writer. The story kind of reminds me of situations in my life, and you did a great job of bringing emotion out of the character.

All in all, this was...:cheese:

I felt his pain, though I don't know the name of him..... I luckily do know about Deathstars :con:

Heartbreaking all together... Amazing.

One Shot for One Shot. :cute:

I loved that opening sentence. It was just so... I'm not sure how to explain it, but I believe it really introduced us into the emotion we're about to read.

But as soon as he was away from the fans, on the bus, he curled up by my side, like a shy cat. Awh, that sentence was so sweet. Actually, that entire paragraph was adorable, especially since it contradicts what the fan's think, that he's a narcissist. However, I'm ashamed to admit that I had to Google Cat Casino's name in order to find out what band he was from. :shifty

It's so sad that Cat changes as he grows up, how much pain he's putting him through. You wrote the process of him changing very well, very realistically. And he's helpless against Cat, because he loves him so much. It's really heartbreaking, especially since it happens to lots of people.

Those last two paragraphs were absolutely gorgeous. And you chose a magnificent line to end on. This was a very bittersweet oneshot, and incredibly well written.

Wow. This was absolutely beautiful, as well as heartbreaking.
I could practically feel the pain Cat was causing him; it was written that well.
Wonderful job. :]

This was so beautiful, and sad and straight out amazing written. My eyes are full of tears that'll run as soon as I blink..

Bad Cat hurt Whip :/ ='( It was Whip right?;P Anyway, perfect written and so damn sad!

:cheese: Oh my god.

This was just... amazing.

There's so much raw, blunt emotion packed into this and it's just so awe-inspiring. I have a huge soft-spot for Deathstars slash, and this just... I don't know how to word it, really.

For as long as he lets me, I will love him and make him feel loved, ignoring the fact that he doesn’t care about it one bit. I was getting all choked up right about here. It's so heart-breaking, what Cat's doing to him and his stubbornness to keep holding on to him is just beautiful. The fact that he still loves Cat so much even though he's changed is so... gah.

The whole time I was reading this, I wanted to run around screaming, slap them both, but also hug them at the same time. There's so much... dysfunction, I suppose, to the relationship and the way you've written it is awesome.

I seriously loved this so much. I'm off to have a look at some of your other stuff now. :cute: