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  • jewellboney

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    Your writing style is the best. This story is unique and I am so hooked on the characters. It is amazing if you will continue to write because you are so talented. I would like to Inform you that NoveIStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html
    April 13th, 2021 at 05:52am
  • punxmarley

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    I couldn't help but laugh at the Arriva bitch session in chapter one, I understand all too well aha. Amazing story though i'm loving it
    March 21st, 2016 at 10:02pm
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    I couldn't help but laugh at the Arriva bitch session in chapter one, I understand all too well aha. Amazing story though i'm loving it
    March 21st, 2016 at 10:02pm
  • Jenni

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    @ charmishgirl
    HAHA oh my God... I never realised this before. I think at the time of writing it... no I had probably never had one! I should probably change that. XD Thanks for pointing it out! Which chapter is it on if I may ask? :P
    October 9th, 2013 at 12:52am
  • charmishgirl

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    I know this is such a weird comment but in one of your chapters you have your character drinking a frapucchino and you describe it as hot. Have you never had a frapucchino? Unless you meant a cappuccino which is hot. I don't know why I wanted to point that out.
    October 8th, 2013 at 07:12pm
  • Jenni

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    @ Lunacy.Fringe.
    Awww I'm sorry I made you cry! >: Feel bad now!
    February 5th, 2013 at 03:28pm
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    Crying now.
    Thanks.
    D':

    Billiee noooo! Come baaack!!!
    February 4th, 2013 at 10:44am
  • Jenni

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    @ charmishgirl
    Tiff still exists, she's in 17 to 19.
    And I re-wrote the Tré part because it was out of character for him to act like an ass, since he had Stevie and was content.
    Sorry it seemed to change so much. It really only veered off towards the end, and that's because of how weird the original story went, it seemed to hop about with it's story line.
    It's also so it matches up to the new sequel that's coming out for it.
    :( Sorry yet again! I do still have the very original on my computer. xD
    September 16th, 2012 at 11:23pm
  • charmishgirl

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    I came back to this story and didn't realize how drastic your changes were. I read the older version several times and had my favorite chapters and everything. Like, I loved the birthday chapter where Tre was drunk and told Billie that Jenni liked him. And where's Tiffany??? unless I'm reading the wrong story....
    September 13th, 2012 at 10:37am
  • Jenni

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    Thank you m'dear! :]

    ...I know me too. ;O;
    June 18th, 2008 at 12:08am
  • peacemaker.

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    Wow the re-writing is osem! I miss these stories D:
    June 16th, 2008 at 10:03pm
  • Jenni

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    =D okay! Have fun. :P
    January 6th, 2007 at 07:45pm
  • English Rose

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    No matter, I got it now! 8)
    January 6th, 2007 at 07:44pm
  • Jenni

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    Lol, the thread is on page 1. :]
    Or just click here:

    http://www.mibba.com/stories/summary/1500/
    January 6th, 2007 at 07:42pm
  • English Rose

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    :shock: It is? *runs off to find it & read it* :D
    January 6th, 2007 at 07:41pm
  • Jenni

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    It's up if you didn't notice. =D
    January 6th, 2007 at 07:40pm
  • English Rose

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    Whoot! Kicking :D
    January 6th, 2007 at 07:39pm
  • Jenni

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    Okay I'll put it up now. :]
    January 6th, 2007 at 07:29pm
  • English Rose

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    Ooooo now now! :D Although the amount of stories I gotta catch up on after going out last night, I probably won't be able to read it until later...but I suppose I could put it at the top of my 'To Read' list if you do post it now! :D
    January 6th, 2007 at 07:28pm
  • Jenni

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    To submit it later? Maybe now... ? :tehe:
    January 6th, 2007 at 07:25pm
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